THE STORY OF ARPEGGIO
Submitted November 3, 2005 Updated April 19, 2006 Status Incomplete | The story of how I (being Arpeggio) lived after Sly turned matters to Clock-La and after the horrid beating I took! A must for any real Sly Cooper fan! Enjoy!
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Chapters
Chapter 1 - PHYSICALLY DISABLED
Submitted: November 3, 2005 • Updated: November 3, 2005
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Chapter 2 - AN INFURIATING DISCOVERY
Submitted: November 3, 2005 • Updated: November 3, 2005
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Chapter 3 - THE LONG RIDE TO PARIS
Submitted: November 6, 2005 • Updated: November 6, 2005
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Chapter 4 - A NEW ASSISTANT
Submitted: November 15, 2005 • Updated: November 15, 2005
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Chapter 5 - GATHERING OF THE KLAWW GANG
Submitted: November 19, 2005 • Updated: November 19, 2005
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Chapter 6 - DIMITRI RE-JOINS
Submitted: November 27, 2005 • Updated: November 27, 2005
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Chapter 7 - WILD BISON CHASE
Submitted: December 28, 2005 • Updated: December 28, 2005
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Chapter 8 - THE WILD RIDE TO HOLLAND
Submitted: January 9, 2006 • Updated: January 9, 2006
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Chapter 9 - JEAN-BISON, WHERE ART THOU?
Submitted: February 18, 2006 • Updated: February 18, 2006
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Chapter 10 - WAITING AGAIN
Submitted: March 18, 2006 • Updated: March 18, 2006
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Chapter 11 - THE BEAST AWAKES
Submitted: April 19, 2006 • Updated: April 19, 2006
Word count: 665 • Size: 3k • Comments: 8 • views: 385
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Immortally_Broken on June 12, 2007, 12:19:52 PM
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Crowfeather on October 25, 2006, 10:57:04 AM
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Omg, when are you going to make the next part of this story??Hawiian_Tiger on July 2, 2006, 8:55:03 AM
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Dimitri: Dimitri no like Kara that much any more....shes mean to Dimitri alot!Me: *Sigh...*
Immortally_Broken on October 9, 2006, 5:18:30 AM
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Kara: Aww... sorry, Dimitri. -hugglesOMGCUTENESS-Me: o.o -eyes burn from kawaiiness-
Hawiian_Tiger on October 13, 2006, 6:42:59 AM
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Dimitri: I have learn not to trust you...SO GET OFF!!!!!Immortally_Broken on October 13, 2006, 6:45:12 AM
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Kara: ...Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo... -gasps- oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo....!!! -cries-Sam: Jesus, woman. o_o
Hawiian_Tiger on October 13, 2006, 6:48:18 AM
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Dimitri: I-I-I...I'm sorry?!? :DImmortally_Broken on October 13, 2006, 6:55:09 AM
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Kara: Yay! -hugs and licks cheek-Sam: ..Ew.. -backs away-
Hawiian_Tiger on October 13, 2006, 7:18:03 AM
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Dimitri: Blug! >_<Immortally_Broken on October 13, 2006, 7:37:00 AM
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Kara: What? I'm a cat. It happens. -coughs-Hawiian_Tiger on October 13, 2006, 1:52:57 PM
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Dimitri: But still....Blug...Immortally_Broken on October 13, 2006, 1:57:00 PM
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...xDHawiian_Tiger on October 13, 2006, 2:26:05 PM
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Dimitri: >_<Immortally_Broken on October 13, 2006, 1:58:32 PM
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Kara: ..I'll say blug. You taste like fries and honey. ><(Greasy-sweeeet)
Arpeggio on August 13, 2006, 2:34:09 PM
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LOL & LOL!!! XDCrowfeather on October 6, 2006, 9:21:35 AM
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Lol, just joking. I have an unnatural obsession with him. 0.oArpeggio on October 9, 2006, 4:38:25 AM
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XD lol Yeah. That was me, last year!Immortally_Broken on October 6, 2006, 6:36:39 AM
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Yay, Kara's a lot more feminine than me; but she's also a lot easier to anger. xPArpeggio on October 9, 2006, 4:38:05 AM
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It's the truth...do you mind that I make her so feminine?Immortally_Broken on October 9, 2006, 5:17:25 AM
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Oh no, she's supposed to be. You captured her perfectly. o.oCrowfeather on September 22, 2006, 7:11:11 AM
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OMG! I love this story! *faves* I'm Arpeggio's number on fan! You stole my username! LOL, J/K.Arpeggio on October 6, 2006, 2:33:23 AM
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You think so, eh? XD Well actually you aren't. There are quite a lot of Arpeggio fans on this site. There really are! I'm more into General Grievous and Bats now, anyway! Glad you liked my story, and welcome to FAC!mystic_rat_theif on June 3, 2006, 2:27:38 AM
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yayayaay! GIRLY FAN IS RIGHT! PEGGIE!!! I'VE MISSED YOU!! Omg! this is awesome!!! I LOVE YOU JEAN!Arpeggio on August 13, 2006, 2:33:44 PM
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Aww, thank you! I missed you too! I HAVE to add a new chapter soon, don't I? I luff Jean too! ^_^Hawiian_Tiger on July 2, 2006, 8:38:33 AM
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Dimitri: Dat was NOT cool bro! I hated that moment! And I STILL need my bling bro!Me: Oh can it Dimitri! But Peggio, be nice to Dimitri or els I'll have Rajan tear YOU to shreds!
Arpeggio on June 4, 2006, 2:23:16 AM
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^_^ Thanks!Weirdo on May 28, 2006, 1:35:14 AM
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OOOHH I WISH THIS WILL CONTINUE SOON! O.O I'M NOW FANGIRL OF THIS STUFF!Arpeggio on May 11, 2006, 11:27:23 AM
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>< Thanks! My idea of Kara is, she's a bit femanine, but she's got plenty of spunk and tough-girl attitude to back it up.>< Eee! Fangirls! That makes 2, I think. I know Mystic_rat_thief is one as well! I never knew my writing would be so popular!
Immortally_Broken on May 11, 2006, 11:18:58 AM
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Bwaahahahahaaaa!!!Kara: Ditto. :O
Okay, fact: I absolutely LOVE this story! I can't wait for the next chapter!
You got Kara down so well, and Bison was just great. xD I'm a fangirl of your story now.
Arpeggio on May 7, 2006, 3:16:56 AM
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^^ Thanks you! Thank you!Arpeggio on May 7, 2006, 3:16:16 AM
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LOL :)Arpeggio on May 7, 2006, 3:15:53 AM
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>< Teehee!Arpeggio on May 7, 2006, 3:15:39 AM
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As do I! I am honored to have her in my story!Arpeggio on May 7, 2006, 3:15:18 AM
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Arpeggio: I know! You'd think they would tell me about these things!Arpeggio on May 7, 2006, 3:14:40 AM
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:DArpeggio on May 7, 2006, 3:14:27 AM
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LOLArpeggio on May 4, 2006, 8:03:04 AM
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^^ Well...it SOUNDED Bison..y....Well, glad you like the story cuz it's no where NEAR done! :DWeirdo on May 2, 2006, 9:38:40 PM
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MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! 'little miss Neyla...' xDDDDD This is wonderful story, PLEASE CONTINUE! ME WANTS MORE WONDERFUL STORY! *faves*Arpeggio on March 24, 2006, 1:54:04 AM
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"aww peggie" what??? o_OWeirdo on March 22, 2006, 3:58:51 AM
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Mwahahahahahaa! It's THE GLORIOUS EVIL GRIN!! YAY!! xD Woopee, toasted guard for lunch! :DDmystic_rat_theif on March 20, 2006, 7:47:46 AM
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Aww, Peggie....Arpeggio on March 18, 2006, 5:24:43 AM
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Arpeggio: *faintly thru hugging* This isn't the FIRST time today!Me: Thank 'oo!
Immortally_Broken on March 18, 2006, 5:14:37 AM
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Muahahaha!Kara: Oo... I HAVE always wanted to do that! I lub ye, cap'n! -huggles 'Peggie-.
I'm sure she means that in the least creepy way possible. ^-^
Love the chapter, Arpeggio!!
Arpeggio on March 10, 2006, 10:57:12 PM
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XD Thanks! ^^Weirdo on March 10, 2006, 6:10:42 PM
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Mwahahahahha, General Tweety. That little copter-thing was so hilarious! xpWeirdo on March 10, 2006, 5:54:36 PM
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YAY! More Kara! She's lovely! Mwahahahha, "who's the brains of operation?""moi!" xp
Arpeggio on March 8, 2006, 7:44:08 AM
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LOL! So true! ^^ Lotsa Gumbo! Tsao musta been one of the bomb totin' roosters! :D And, thanks Jazz, I try my best! I LUV TO WRIIIIIITE!
LOUD AND LONG AND CLEEAAAAAAAR!!!!!!! XD Sorry.
Immortally_Broken on February 23, 2006, 8:56:21 AM
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Oh my God...I was playing Sly 1 and I just realised that it was all Sly's fault in the first place...Clearly, HE KILLED TSAO'S WIFE FOR GUMBO SO HE COULD HAVE A KEY!
Kara: Le GASP!
Immortally_Broken on February 19, 2006, 4:55:05 AM
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Heehee. Jing-King ish gonna be in my story! ^-^But...way later on. =/
mystic_rat_theif on February 19, 2006, 1:25:17 AM
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Lol, stupid Tsao! I really like how everything goes with the real story!!Hawiian_Tiger on February 18, 2006, 11:14:08 AM
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DIMITRI!!!!! YOU GOTTA REJOIN!!! DUDE!Arpeggio on February 18, 2006, 11:12:53 AM
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oh, and I hate Tsao like heck, too. The other day, Alicia (my sister,) and I were at a chinese resteraunt, and in the menu there was "General Tsao's Chicken". I said, "He's a boy! A ROOSTER!!!"She said, "Maybe he killed his old wife for Jing-King!"
I thought that sounded reasonable! XD
Arpeggio on February 18, 2006, 11:11:14 AM
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XD Yes! Tsao!!! You guessed right! ^^ It's pretty obvious though, ain't it??? Anyway, wait 'till you see!Immortally_Broken on February 18, 2006, 11:08:06 AM
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Heehheee!Kara even talks like me. That's great!
Ohnuu... General Tsao.. ;_;
I really hate him. A lot.
And how will we unfreeze Bison!?? D=
Arpeggio on February 18, 2006, 10:45:29 AM
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yes! I know exactly how the story will end and you all doooooon't!!!!!! NYAHNYAH!!!!!!! XDImmortally_Broken on February 10, 2006, 10:30:26 AM
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And don't be sad, 'Peggie...Neyla betrayed us all...We're gonna get revenge soon!Immortally_Broken on February 1, 2006, 7:12:14 AM
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Yeah...What's funny is that I actually have one! -does the big-screen T.V. dance-carmelita on January 27, 2006, 6:58:19 AM
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Me and Sly are..Oops I guess he already told you.Arpeggio on January 16, 2006, 11:38:53 AM
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*Sigh*...thanks...oh, and that would be KARA's big screen TV...mystic_rat_theif on January 15, 2006, 2:04:18 AM
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OH, AND continue PLEASE!mystic_rat_theif on January 15, 2006, 2:03:41 AM
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Peggie, you might be sad for getting squished (lol) BUT AT LEAST YOU HAVE A WIDE SCREEN TV!mystic_rat_theif on January 15, 2006, 1:57:07 AM
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PEGGIE, YOU ARE NOW (officialy) MY FAVORITE AUTHORS!!!!!mystic_rat_theif on January 15, 2006, 1:51:55 AM
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YAY KARA! THE POWER OF PERSUASION! LOLmystic_rat_theif on January 15, 2006, 1:47:08 AM
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Whoa! I never would have thought that this was such a greasy sweet story, Arpeggio! You're nopw gonna go into my next pixie!mystic_rat_theif on January 15, 2006, 1:40:51 AM
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lmao, I love Kara! mystic_rat_theif on January 15, 2006, 1:40:50 AM
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lmao, I love Kara! mystic_rat_theif on January 14, 2006, 10:56:40 AM
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lol, Really? Sucker Punch Productions made a vedio game about them? I would have never geusses.....lmaomystic_rat_theif on January 14, 2006, 10:51:23 AM
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O.O........mystic_rat_theif on January 14, 2006, 10:47:36 AM
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O.O YAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYY!!! PEGGIE'S ALIVE AND WELL!! *dances around room for hours till i suddenly drop*Immortally_Broken on January 14, 2006, 8:20:28 AM
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Aw, 'Peggie. Don't be upset about getting squishied! You were still cute, ne? Besides, you're alright now, right?Riiiight?
Yeah!
Snows-wolf on January 13, 2006, 10:01:38 PM
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Apeggio! This is a great story, sorry about getting...well...squashed! Anyhoo I love the story!Arpeggio on January 11, 2006, 1:38:43 AM
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Thaaaaaaaank yew!Toky on January 9, 2006, 2:07:54 PM
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Wow, this is getting good! Keep it up! :DArpeggio on January 9, 2006, 11:37:38 AM
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How did you know??? I WAS laughing a bit there...Arpeggio: I GOT SQUASHED!!!!!!
Immortally_Broken on January 9, 2006, 8:59:22 AM
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Awww...Arpeggio...Be happy! You're a legacy! Kara's yer buddy! And update soon, this story's getting better and better.I like the relationship between the three characters so far, and that's not just because one of them is mine. You're really, really doing a great job on this.
Quit laughing, I'm trying to give a serious reveiw! xD
Arpeggio on January 9, 2006, 12:53:57 AM
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Don't worry! I will! I've got some niiiiiiiiice ideas for Kara in the next chapter!Immortally_Broken on January 8, 2006, 10:49:07 AM
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Kara: *gasp* Really!? *fangirl squeal*Me: -_-; That's it, back in my head you go.
Kara: Aaaaww...It's icky in there...
Immortally_Broken on January 8, 2006, 10:44:30 AM
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...*shock*Kara: You see, Murray? Even Sly and Carmelita are dating. EVERYONE'S doing it!
Murray: Look, I like you, but I haven't even MET you yet! D=
Kara: S'ok. I'll wait for you big guy.
Murray: *Backs away slowly*
Immortally_Broken on January 8, 2006, 5:06:35 AM
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Whoo hooO!!!!It's very creative having Kara and Dimitri fight. You better keep it up, 'Peggie, you better!!! This story is awesome!
ThexNewxContessa on January 1, 2006, 12:32:25 PM
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WOW PLEEEEEEASE Continue, Your Supremeness!I reallly can't wait to hear...err....READ the next chapter! pleaaase?
-does the kitty pouty face-
pllllease?
Arpeggio on January 1, 2006, 3:39:05 AM
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NO comments??? *Sigh*...The_Beast_Within on December 22, 2005, 6:36:10 AM
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Doing great so far! Keep it up!Arpeggio on December 17, 2005, 12:55:40 AM
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Bleh...Arpeggio on December 17, 2005, 12:52:31 AM
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......O_o....woah....Sly on December 15, 2005, 9:57:33 PM
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OH i need to tell you something arpeggio.....me and Carmelita or going out now!!Arpeggio on December 15, 2005, 12:58:22 PM
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Bleh, bleh...whatever....Arpeggio on December 13, 2005, 1:04:20 PM
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Errr.........for all my loyal readers.......might be a while for next chapter!!!! AM REAAAAALLY sorry, but I've been busy lately.....unless....I'll try and work on the story tomorrow, 'k! Arpeggio on December 12, 2005, 4:10:19 AM
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yay! Can't wait to read it! Here I go...Immortally_Broken on December 9, 2005, 5:18:27 AM
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Oh, but I got my story up Arpeggio! Go comment or I'll sick Kara on ya! -Not that I'll have to...9_9-Immortally_Broken on December 9, 2005, 5:16:44 AM
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It's true.. O_o;Arpeggio on December 2, 2005, 7:29:47 AM
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No...not even MURRAY would want to, because she'd snuggle him and love on him forever! Sly on December 1, 2005, 5:05:20 AM
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COOL don t want to run in to her i a dark alley ......unless your murrySly on December 1, 2005, 4:58:38 AM
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YES I RED THE BIO BUT THE WAY SHE SAID THAT IT SOUNDED LIKE SHE WANTS TO HERT MY NOT LIKE ME MURRAY ALLREADY NOSE AND I THANCK HE LIKES HER TO!!!!!!carmelita on November 30, 2005, 4:33:21 AM
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I've still got some tricks up my sleve.DON'T underestimate me.Arpeggio on November 30, 2005, 2:37:43 AM
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Oh we shall see, alright! Heheheheh we shall see...>)Arpeggio on November 30, 2005, 2:36:03 AM
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It's okay! Thank you for 'da writing comment! I have been working at it for 3 years now!Toky on November 29, 2005, 9:49:06 AM
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Whoops. Read your comment wrong. ^^; Ehh...-_-;Toky on November 29, 2005, 9:47:39 AM
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But I DO read this! I just forget to comment...>_< *smacks forehead* I'm such an idiot.Anyway, keep up the good work! I'm looking forward to the next chapter...You're such a better writer than I am. >_>
Arpeggio on November 28, 2005, 10:47:53 AM
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You're welcome...are you the only one besides Toky who reads this story?? :(carmelita on November 28, 2005, 10:10:25 AM
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We'll see about that.Immortally_Broken on November 28, 2005, 1:19:32 AM
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lol! Great job! My favorite chapter. Kara's awesome. Yay!Arpeggio on November 27, 2005, 12:36:45 AM
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That's what you'd THINK...unfortunatly for you, it is not...carmelita on November 26, 2005, 7:27:41 AM
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Very well then.It is a small universe.Arpeggio on November 23, 2005, 11:51:36 PM
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What makes you think I'll even be on EARTH?!?carmelita on November 23, 2005, 12:53:53 PM
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I'm an Inspector.I will find you.As they say,it is a very small world.Arpeggio on November 22, 2005, 6:04:43 AM
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Thanks! Arpeggio on November 22, 2005, 6:02:17 AM
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Heehee! Whooo....almost NOBODY likes Murray! :PArpeggio on November 22, 2005, 6:01:14 AM
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Whahaha! Well, of COURSE I won't stay in my blimp! THAT'S what EVERYONE expects! I'm going someplace where you will NEVER find me! You and none of the rest of the world! >:Dmystic_rat_theif on November 21, 2005, 10:33:56 AM
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"Watch out!!!" Jazmin Cooper comes and pushes carmalita seconds before a missle hit her. Immortally_Broken on November 21, 2005, 5:39:32 AM
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Whoo! Kara's psycho! I mean, psychic. Yeah, that's what I meant. Anyways, I'm gonna be writing a fanfiction (I hope -_-)! You've inspired me and you see, that's hard to do, so congrats! And keep up the good work, I can't wait for the next part.Immortally_Broken on November 21, 2005, 5:35:54 AM
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lmao xDcarmelita on November 21, 2005, 4:34:18 AM
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#1)I think you would be in the blimp because that is where you always are.#2)Who says I would stay in the helicopter long enough for you to shoot me down?Arpeggio on November 21, 2005, 2:03:25 AM
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What makes you think I'll be in my blimp? Besides, even if I WERE, I would shoot you down with my NEW turrets! XDcarmelita on November 20, 2005, 3:52:37 AM
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I have a helicopter.Arpeggio on November 18, 2005, 8:36:33 AM
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Ha-ha! After Neyla's behind barsm I will have no reason to come on the ground again! And I will go to a place where I KNOW where you will NEVER find me! XDcarmelita on November 18, 2005, 4:56:32 AM
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(Starts shooting at Sly and Arpeggio.Misses and hits nereby flashlight guard.)Next time Arpeggio,you won't be so lucky.After I get Neyla behind bars,I will hunt you down. Arpeggio on November 18, 2005, 12:03:59 AM
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Oh-no, no, no, no! Don't worry! She doesn't want you! Did you read about Kara? It's MURRAY she's after. You'd better tell HIM to be alert! Arpeggio on November 18, 2005, 12:02:32 AM
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Wait! Things were just getting start-*SQUAWK!* Let go of me, you fool!!! XCSly on November 17, 2005, 10:29:09 PM
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nice but i am shackie about one thing WHY DOES SHE WANT ME!!!!Sly on November 17, 2005, 10:14:42 PM
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Run arpeggio now you got her afther you (grabs arpeggio and runs)Arpeggio on November 17, 2005, 12:26:02 AM
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Uh...you're welcome! O_o I feel special! Immortally_Broken on November 16, 2005, 6:39:16 AM
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Laugh now at the typos I made in my girlish excitement.Oh, and feel free to ask me if you need to know something about Kara, okay?
Thanks again.
-skips off happily-
Immortally_Broken on November 16, 2005, 6:35:28 AM
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I can't beleive you actually did it! lol!Tt's perfect! She was related to Rajan when I made her. She was almost his daughter, but then I finished level three and hated him, so I changed it.
You did a great job with her. Thanks.
I feel so special. ^^
Arpeggio on November 15, 2005, 1:26:07 PM
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Hopefully I created Kara as an acceptable character! The whole-Rajan-as-her-second-cousin thing was the only way I could think of to make this work! Sorry if I messed with Kara too much, Immortally_broken!! :(Arpeggio on November 15, 2005, 12:29:29 PM
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Arpeggio: Well, I AM very smart and quite cute, I must admit. I think it's because of my clothes that's what the artist in my split personality (Whom you may call Zaff or Grievous when speaking directly to her) says,ME: Alright, ALRIGHT, yes, immortie, I WILL put Kara in my story if it means so much to you. Did you see Toky's story?!? She wrote about ME!!! :D Okay, will start on it now! ;D
Immortally_Broken on November 15, 2005, 5:39:07 AM
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But Arpeggio...yer the smartest of the Klaww gang, too...and the cutest.So, it's okay, man.
Why am I flattering you like this?
No idea.
-cough-putKaraintehstory-cough-
I just like ya. ^^;
Arpeggio on November 15, 2005, 3:28:35 AM
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Yeah, I kinda DID think about that, but I'm not much older than you, you know! Though I am MUCH more mature, you MUST admit! :D I still am in my 20's! I am the youngest member of the KLAWW Gang! :) It DOES get annoying at times, though.Sly on November 14, 2005, 5:19:13 AM
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rigth on get her you sound like me when you said what fun would that be !!!!Arpeggio on November 10, 2005, 11:15:36 PM
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That may be the problem in my story, but now I am over it. Catch her if you like, you shan't be angering me! XDcarmelita on November 10, 2005, 5:54:05 AM
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(jumps on nereby rooftop and starts shooting guards)That's okay.I don't need any help catching Neyla.I can do it myself.Arpeggio on November 10, 2005, 4:16:28 AM
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Ah, ah, ah! Gaurds! *150 flashlight gaurds walk in front of Arpeggio, ready to strike Carmelita* It CAN be an issue, but in this case, no! >Dcarmelita on November 9, 2005, 4:42:43 AM
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(Points shock pistol at Arpeggio) When you're at the wrong end of a shockpistol,trust is not an issue.Arpeggio on November 8, 2005, 1:07:24 AM
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Oh, don't worry! The story gets better! Keep checking back for updates 'cause Neyla's goin' down! I'm working on chapter four right now! (Silly me! Making one and only chapter! NOW just LOOK at my progress!)Sly_and_ally_forever on November 7, 2005, 6:10:36 AM
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This is really good! Do me a favor, and kick Neyla's buut!!!!Arpeggio on November 6, 2005, 12:25:23 AM
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NEYLA IS EVIL AND THAT'S THE END OF IT!!!! (What kind of person double-crosses EVERYONE to get her way? It's very selfish, uncaring, rude, behavior!)Arpeggio on November 6, 2005, 12:22:15 AM
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We'll see, Carmelita...first you have to prove to us your trust...(which I doubt there is ANY...)Immortally_Broken on November 4, 2005, 5:40:54 AM
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Yeeee! You know...I don't know how to feel about Neyla. On the one hand, I really, really hate her and on the other...aw, just kill 'er before I go back to being a decent person when my sugar rush wears off. O_o;Immortally_Broken on November 4, 2005, 5:38:22 AM
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It's good that the Cooper Gang and Arpeggio are teaming up, because now Kara can help Arpeggio and still stalk...er...did I say stalk? I meant -cough-kirjiwifitz-cough- Murray. =Dcarmelita on November 4, 2005, 5:04:45 AM
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You and Sly can cut that deal under one condition.Let me in on it!Arpeggio on November 3, 2005, 9:39:22 AM
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Yes, I do! So, then, I hereby decree a peace from war between the Cooper Gang and all of my men (birds) and I. Thanks for reading my stories!Sly on November 3, 2005, 8:39:04 AM
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rigth on go and get herSly on November 3, 2005, 8:32:37 AM
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of corus i as you now am more trust worthy the neyla i ll help you stop herArpeggio on November 3, 2005, 5:30:11 AM
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Very good, Cooper. I think we MIGHT be able to cut a deal. I will forgive you and not go after you, if you come after Neyla with me!After all, you didn't do that much to stop me. Even in your attempt to stop me you helped me by dropping the Clockwerk Parts only to snap them into place! You also stole all the parts for me and completed most of my plan!
Anyway, what do you say, truce 'till Neyla's jailed?
Sly on November 3, 2005, 5:13:51 AM
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HAY I AM ON ARPEGGIO SIDE I WILL HELP HIM GET YOU!!!Arpeggio on November 3, 2005, 4:02:33 AM
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If I've heard it once, I've heard it one thousand times, Neyla! I'm tired of you saying things that just won't come to pass! Anyway, thank you for the comment!Neyla11 on November 3, 2005, 1:08:37 AM
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I likes ur story!!But U or Carmelita and Sly cant catch me!!!
Kara: Sorry, what was that?
Nothin'.