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Chapter 1 - Broken Heart renewed

Just another poem... with my heart poured into it... It's about... you'll see.

Chapter 1 - Broken Heart renewed

Chapter 1 - Broken Heart renewed

All this time your company has been a lie,

I didn't realize, until you made my heart fry,

You never really wanted me,

All you really thought about was how she,

Looked at you.

Your compay was a mistake,

Why can't you realize she's a fake,

I just want to dissapear,

People say I need to get back in gear,

But all I ever needed was that little extra push,

And maybe just make me blush,

But all you ever wanted was her,

And soon you'll crawl back to me when she shows what she really is,

And I'll turn you down, and I can't wait to see that frown!

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Kenshinstrueluv on July 24, 2007, 3:11:10 AM

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KenshinstrueluvI really liked this poem^^ I know a friend who's going through something like this and I'm gonna show her it.  I think she'll really connect^^ You have a great insight to what really happens and how if feels in life. Don't lose that because it's great to have. I encourage you to keep writing so I can keep reading^.~

luckylace222 on July 22, 2007, 9:57:47 AM

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luckylace222:D Well written! And it has a story in itself!

eriepilot44 on July 21, 2007, 10:09:34 PM

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eriepilot44that's good!

InuNaruFable2 on July 21, 2007, 12:20:04 PM

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InuNaruFable2Thank you!!

Littletwo35 on July 21, 2007, 12:19:03 PM

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Littletwo35awwwwww cute