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Chapter 16 - A New Life

A story about the Hidden Sparks team!
Dont be scared of the # of chaps!!! Most of them are Super Short! So really, its like there is 20-24 chapters!!!!
The ratings are just to be safe, its better to be too high with them than too low ^_^
~JJ

Chapter 16 - A New Life

Chapter 16 - A New Life
"CELINE!!!" Jamal yelled as Celine suddenly snapped back into reality and charged at Jamal and tried to kick him but he dodged and punched her in the stomach and then Celine punched Jamal in the stomach...with a chakra enhanced hand which sent him flying!...but Jamal landed and then got punched in the face and again went flying

"You gotta keep your guard up!" The pink haired girl told him

"1 on 2!?!?!?!?...just the way i like it" Jamal said as he dashed at the girls...but in both of his there was a bright blue spinning light "DOUBLE RASENGAN!!!!!" Jamal yelled as he hit the 2 girls....but they poofed and a log was in their place "Well that was a waste of chakra" Jamal sighed as he heard a rustle in a tree

"CHIDORI!!!" Nova appeared out of nowhere and was dashing towards Jamal with Chidori...but Celine was gripping Nova's hand putting A LOT more chakra in it!

"SUPER CHIDORI!!!" Celine yelled just before it hit Jamal

"Ugh" Jamal coughed up a lot of blood...but so did the girls...for a the last second Jamal turned around revealing an Odama Rasengan...

"Well at least you dont go easy on girls anymore" Nova said

"Ånd what was that!?!?!?!...that giant frikin Rasengan?" Celine asked

"Oh that...that is my Odama Rasengan...you guys push me to far past my limit" Jamal said as he fainted from chakra los...and then Mew and Winnie came just staring at heir beat up subordinates

"AAAWWWWWW...why didnt you call me?" Winnie whined " I wanted to fight..."

"Huh" Mew sighed "When say 'you should go train' i dont mean training like this!" Mew said as she pointed a finger while Celine and Nova stared in awe...almost one quarter of the forest was demolished

"Oops" Nova whispered

"Lets go..." Mew said as she pulled Celine and Nova to the town...while Winnie just dragged Jamal

*************************************3 hours later*******************************************************

Jamal was walking around kicking a can...when he saw the ramen store...and ran as fast as he could only to find 2 other boys sitting there with him

"So my 3 favorite customers came for some lunch?" The old man said as he saw three boys grinning from ear to ear "Naruto, Choji, and Jamal...you guys are gonna end up eating all of my ramen!" The old man joked...but the boys took it way to seriously...Naruto was crying his brains out, Choji was just frozen awe and Jamal was slapping himself for taking the ramen store out of buisness

"He was just kidding!" The lady said laughing next to the old man, as she gave them their ramen and they started eating it as fast as they could

****************************************The girls********************************************************

"Lets play truth or dare!" Ino said as she sat up and pointed to Hinata "TRUTH!?!?!?..." Ino said loudley "or dare" Ino said in a creepy voice

"Ummm...Truth" Hinata said

"ok then...who do you like?" Ino said

"Well...uhhh...Naruto" Hinata said stuttery

"HAHA!!!!...I KNEW IT!!!!" TenTen said as Hinata just sat

"Ummm...Nova...Truth or dare..." Hinata said

"Dare" Nova said thinking that there shouldnt be anything that scary that Hinata was going to say but-

"Ok i dare you to kiss every boy you know that has a name from letters B to L that is younger than 16" Hinata said as Nova just stared in awe

Kiba, Choji...and Nova was thinking about the people she had to kiss when she realized...

"I HAVE TO FRIKIN KISS JAMAL!?!?!?!?!!?!?" She yelled as she fell backwards onto the floor "My life cant get any worse..."

*****************************************Ramen Restaurant*********************************************

Choji and Jamal sneezed

"Someone must be thinking...or myabe even talking about you" The old man said as the boys just kept eating

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sorry for not updating...i have been having writers block...and ever since school started, its has just been getting worse...but for now i hope you enjoyed...oh and remeber...everyone is older, so there might be new jutsu...and if you want i will let 2 more Oc's be in the story...so yea...bye bye...i said bye...leave NOW...GET OFF THE FRIKIN PAGE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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zerotimberwolf on September 17, 2007, 8:25:23 PM

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zerotimberwolfcool story

Symphoniaprincess101 on September 15, 2007, 11:39:22 AM

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Symphoniaprincess101LOL that was funny^^

rffraff05 on September 13, 2007, 6:37:19 AM

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rffraff05I agree with celine, poor ramen! oh and i wnat to be one of the oc's!

Konohasdarkshadow on September 13, 2007, 10:45:31 AM

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Konohasdarkshadowwhich 1?...Dan or Tyrone?

rffraff05 on September 15, 2007, 12:18:14 AM

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rffraff05Dan please!!!

Konohasdarkshadow on September 15, 2007, 12:21:07 AM

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Konohasdarkshadowcool

moog1895 on September 13, 2007, 9:39:48 AM

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moog1895O__O oh noes... >//////<

sasukeXsakuraforever on September 13, 2007, 4:56:10 AM

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sasukeXsakuraforeverlolz! Allergies much << or is it? Mwahahaha! That was so funny, POOR RAMEN! Nice job, keep up the good work! ^_~