Chapter 23 - Don't Die
Submitted June 26, 2007 Updated August 12, 2010 Status Incomplete | A story about the Hidden Sparks team! Dont be scared of the # of chaps!!! Most of them are Super Short! So really, its like there is 20-24 chapters!!!! The ratings are just to be safe, its better to be too high with them than too low ^_^ ~JJ
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Chapter 23 - Don't Die
Chapter 23 - Don't Die
She walked foward and heard the trees shaking and the wind slicing...JUMP!!!! She screamed in her head as she jumped and two swords sliced at the bottom of the ground STRAIGHT!!!! She yelled in her head as she posed as a stick straight up and down as two logs fell down on both sides SPIN!!!!!!!!! She yelped into her brain as she spun herself in midair!...as she spun, several crusher thingys (sorry...dont remeber what they are called XP) smashed together right after Winnie spun passed them DIVE..RIGHT...NOW!!!!!!!! She timed in her head as kunai and shuriken clashed together right where she dived from
As she landed she felt something vibrating in a bush hmmm...I KNOW!!!!...I MUST ROLLL!!!!!!!!!!! She thought as she felt millions of various weapons hit the ground right behind her...she stopped to take a breath...which was cut short...she slapped her her together above her head and then what started to appear was in her feet was a sharp thin dagger "Now that...that was close" she said as she hopped up and walked foward
whats that smell?...it smells like...man this sucks Winnie thought as she broke into a sprint gottago gottago...RRRRUUUUNNNN!!!! Winnie thought as she ran at top speed..and............... BBBBBBOOOOOOOMMMMMM!!!!!...a million bombs set off...and barely missed Winnie "Whew" she breathed
"OH YEA WINNIE I FORGOT TO TELL YOU!!!" Dan yelled
"WHAT!!!!" Winnie screamed back into nothingness
"DONT DIE!!!!!" Dan yelled
"oh thanks" Winnie said to herself as she continued
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sorry for the short chaps...its because i am so busy lately...like right now i have to go with my mom to holyoke mall
As she landed she felt something vibrating in a bush hmmm...I KNOW!!!!...I MUST ROLLL!!!!!!!!!!! She thought as she felt millions of various weapons hit the ground right behind her...she stopped to take a breath...which was cut short...she slapped her her together above her head and then what started to appear was in her feet was a sharp thin dagger "Now that...that was close" she said as she hopped up and walked foward
whats that smell?...it smells like...man this sucks Winnie thought as she broke into a sprint gottago gottago...RRRRUUUUNNNN!!!! Winnie thought as she ran at top speed..and............... BBBBBBOOOOOOOMMMMMM!!!!!...a million bombs set off...and barely missed Winnie "Whew" she breathed
"OH YEA WINNIE I FORGOT TO TELL YOU!!!" Dan yelled
"WHAT!!!!" Winnie screamed back into nothingness
"DONT DIE!!!!!" Dan yelled
"oh thanks" Winnie said to herself as she continued
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sorry for the short chaps...its because i am so busy lately...like right now i have to go with my mom to holyoke mall
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moog1895 on December 10, 2007, 4:21:45 AM
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Awww! Why did he tell her! I really was hoping shewould die.... LOL jkpizza24 on November 4, 2007, 9:34:26 AM
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Wow im being put through heck .nice jorb dudenextguardian on November 3, 2007, 12:09:00 PM
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Good stuff!Symphoniaprincess101 on October 30, 2007, 8:33:46 AM
again i'm with celine^^btw where's the kiss sceen between Nova and Jamal?*says that in a mischiviuos voice*sasukeXsakuraforever on October 30, 2007, 5:56:30 AM
YEEE-HAAA! You go Winnie! *holds up the #1 foam finger* YAHOO! nice writing Bro! Keep up the awesome work!..AND HAVE FUN AT THE MALL! :P
rffraff05 on October 29, 2007, 11:19:49 AM
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Don't Die!