Chapter 1 - A Friendship Lost
Submitted November 10, 2007 Updated November 10, 2007 Status Complete | I owe J.T. thanks for this ^^ (not for the subject!!! No!! For the inspiration to write a poem ^^) After reading all his poems I decided to try and write one of my own. I was thinking about one of the friends I lost once and this is what came of it.
Category:
Miscellaneous » Writing » Poetry |
Chapter 1 - A Friendship Lost
Chapter 1 - A Friendship Lost
A Friendship Lost
I listen
As someone close to me
Tells me how I’ve hurt them.
They say
I never care
And that I’m never there.
That I never listen
To what they need to say.
I say it isn’t true.
Of course I care,
I’m always there to listen.
I always try to help.
But now they are the one
Who won’t listen.
I watch
As they pull themselves away.
I lose them
As the moments pass by
But nothing I say
Brings them back.
I feel
My soul being torn.
My heart breaks
As it has so many times before.
Just another hole,
That time will only cover
But not close.
The reason
Is a friendship lost,
Never to be regained.
I listen
As someone close to me
Tells me how I’ve hurt them.
They say
I never care
And that I’m never there.
That I never listen
To what they need to say.
I say it isn’t true.
Of course I care,
I’m always there to listen.
I always try to help.
But now they are the one
Who won’t listen.
I watch
As they pull themselves away.
I lose them
As the moments pass by
But nothing I say
Brings them back.
I feel
My soul being torn.
My heart breaks
As it has so many times before.
Just another hole,
That time will only cover
But not close.
The reason
Is a friendship lost,
Never to be regained.
Comments
You are not authorized to comment here. Your must be registered and logged in to comment
bookworm369 on November 10, 2007, 10:19:02 AM
bookworm369 on
Oh wow its beautiful, you should definitely do more! I love it!
YoriXYamiForever on November 10, 2007, 10:21:32 AM
bookworm369 on November 10, 2007, 10:23:58 AM
bookworm369 on
YoriXYamiForever on November 10, 2007, 10:24:52 AM
bookworm369 on November 10, 2007, 10:26:33 AM
bookworm369 on
YoriXYamiForever on November 10, 2007, 10:29:25 AM
bookworm369 on November 11, 2007, 12:48:56 AM
bookworm369 on
KelekiahGaladrian on November 10, 2007, 10:22:31 AM
YoriXYamiForever on November 10, 2007, 10:23:58 AM
KelekiahGaladrian on November 10, 2007, 10:14:05 AM
Wow, that's good Yori-chan. ^^ I LOVE IT! But who's the friend you lost? TELL ME WHO THEY ARE SO I CAN BEAT THEM UP!! I WILL NEVER LEAVE YOU!! *glomps and never lets go* That was amazing though. You're just as good as bookworm369 is at writing poems. ^^ He definitely must've been your inspiration. ^^