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Chapter 1 - A Friendship Lost

I owe J.T. thanks for this ^^ (not for the subject!!! No!! For the inspiration to write a poem ^^) After reading all his poems I decided to try and write one of my own.

I was thinking about one of the friends I lost once and this is what came of it.

Chapter 1 - A Friendship Lost

Chapter 1 - A Friendship Lost
A Friendship Lost

I listen
As someone close to me
Tells me how I’ve hurt them.
They say
I never care
And that I’m never there.
That I never listen
To what they need to say.
I say it isn’t true.
Of course I care,
I’m always there to listen.
I always try to help.
But now they are the one
Who won’t listen.
I watch
As they pull themselves away.
I lose them
As the moments pass by
But nothing I say
Brings them back.
I feel
My soul being torn.
My heart breaks
As it has so many times before.
Just another hole,
That time will only cover
But not close.
The reason
Is a friendship lost,
Never to be regained.

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bookworm369 on November 10, 2007, 10:19:02 AM

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bookworm369Oh wow its beautiful, you should definitely do more! I love it!

YoriXYamiForever on November 10, 2007, 10:21:32 AM

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YoriXYamiForeverThanks! ^////^

bookworm369 on November 10, 2007, 10:23:58 AM

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bookworm369No problem, you deserve it, this is better than mine by far!

YoriXYamiForever on November 10, 2007, 10:24:52 AM

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YoriXYamiForever*swats at you* None of that now! Yours are amazing! They're what inspired me in the first place! Don't ever say they're not good! ^_^

bookworm369 on November 10, 2007, 10:26:33 AM

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bookworm369actually i never really said that, i just said i like this one better lol

YoriXYamiForever on November 10, 2007, 10:29:25 AM

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YoriXYamiForever*pauses, reads previous reply quickly* oh. *blushes* My mistake lol. Still! Yours are wonderful!!

I like yours better than mine so how about we call it truce? lol

bookworm369 on November 11, 2007, 12:48:56 AM

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bookworm369^_^ deal

KelekiahGaladrian on November 10, 2007, 10:22:31 AM

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KelekiahGaladrianI AGREE!!!

YoriXYamiForever on November 10, 2007, 10:23:58 AM

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YoriXYamiForeverlol Thanks ^^

KelekiahGaladrian on November 10, 2007, 10:14:05 AM

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KelekiahGaladrianWow, that's good Yori-chan. ^^ I LOVE IT! But who's the friend you lost? TELL ME WHO THEY ARE SO I CAN BEAT THEM UP!! I WILL NEVER LEAVE YOU!! *glomps and never lets go* That was amazing though. You're just as good as bookworm369 is at writing poems. ^^ He definitely must've been your inspiration. ^^

YoriXYamiForever on November 10, 2007, 10:18:01 AM

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YoriXYamiForeverThanks! ^^ *blushes* Don't worry, I'm not worried about you leaving me.

You don't know the friend I lost, she was from my town T_T It's all in the past now and anyone who's done that I hardly even think about anymore. That's why I have you and the friends I have now ^_^ *glomps you*

KelekiahGaladrian on November 10, 2007, 10:19:50 AM

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KelekiahGaladrianYOU'RE WELCOME! YOU BETTER NOT WORRY ABOUT IT 'CAUSE I'LL NEVER LEAVE YOU!

That's good that you've forgotten her, in a manner of speaking. YAY FOR YORI-CHAN'S FRIENDS! *glomps back*

YoriXYamiForever on November 10, 2007, 10:21:09 AM

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YoriXYamiForeverlol ^^