Girl from the sky - Chapter 1 - Falling from the sky

1 - Falling from the sky

Girl falling down the sky
With little hope she can’t fly
Sleeping inside her winged shell
So evil wont cast a wicked spell

Fate guiding her fall
So her destiny may stand proud and tall
Not knowing of what shall come
But still hoping she can find her home

Worried about her one true love
Hoping he is not in the heavens above
Missing that warm feeling
Of a kiss and the sound of him breathing

Heading towards a new world
To learn of her destiny word by word
In the care of a king
And carrying a special ring

With now a special gift
For the hope of the people will lift
Searching now for the one with the key
Now it is not the time for her to flee

19 Comments (Most recent 10). Show All

Jul 20, 2006 03:09 PM by: pookiebear chapter 1

i loved it and kimmi90 shut ur @$$ up it was great

Dec 18, 2005 09:52 AM by: mikita_inugirl chapter 1

I like it. It's good.

Nov 11, 2005 08:30 AM by: fariydust chapter 1

That is sooooooooooooo cool and brilliant!! favs

Sep 25, 2005 08:37 AM by: Gatsu chapter 1

If u wrote this poem, you must be a very smart girl, U did alot of thinking. U should have add some kind of song in the background so when other fanart
reads it would make them cry. I know it sounds crazy. I love your poem and your art work

Jan 4, 2005 03:18 PM by: TidusLuver chapter 1

Wow that's deep ... I LOVE IT!!!

Oct 18, 2004 03:48 AM by: japan_girl_168 chapter 1

i didnt evenTHINK that i would get some fans...i have no confidence

Oct 8, 2004 02:43 PM by: japan_girl_168 chapter 1

haha..im amazed what this poem brought to me^^im not confident of my fanfic and fanart talent. but i shall try my best ^^

maybe ill submit another chapter

Oct 7, 2004 02:04 PM by: Kaybo_Sasuke chapter 1

I imagined it was a song and it sounded pretty kool ^_^

Sep 30, 2004 05:30 PM by: Sephir0th666777 chapter 1

wow!
this is really good!

Aug 30, 2004 09:15 AM by: Yin-Yang15 chapter 1

Wow, that's really cool!

Aug 27, 2004 12:53 PM by: Kimmi90 chapter 1

Mandark....get a life just cause she has japan in her username doesn't make her special, so just shut up and go to your mommy she is the only one who cares what you say!

Aug 27, 2004 12:53 PM by: Shantaru chapter 1

and i do know her...she's my friend

Aug 27, 2004 12:50 PM by: Shantaru chapter 1

mandark, these comments aren't because she has "japan" in her username...it's because SHE IS good at what she does...and if you don't like it, then don't say anything at all

Aug 27, 2004 12:45 PM by: japan_girl_168 chapter 1

even actually the first two people who comment know im from canada and i dont have ANY japanese roots in my family.

Aug 27, 2004 12:40 PM by: japan_girl_168 chapter 1

actually Mandark, im not even japanese. i dont even have any japanese in my family. check my profile. i am from canada! im a french canadien

Aug 27, 2004 10:39 AM by: mandark chapter 1

probably half of the comments you get here is because you have the word "japan" in your name. You know japanese love themselves a little too much. i didnt read your story but I am sure it is nice. good job.

Aug 26, 2004 10:16 AM by: sheyla chapter 1

i love it (add it to favs!)keep it up!

Aug 25, 2004 06:10 PM by: Kimmi90 chapter 1

Good job Julie! it is cool me likes it! ^.^

Aug 24, 2004 08:32 AM by: Shantaru chapter 1

o_0 this is...good! very good! you should do more poems jpg168 ^__^