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Serpent Tongue by DarkVampyress
View as PDF, Submitted: 2005-05-24, Updated: 2005-05-24, Chapters: 1, Size: 1K, Words: 211, Comments: 8, Views: 252   
Miscellaneous (3987) > Writing (289) > Gothic (47)
Just a lovely poem that I wrote while listening to Cradle of Filth...
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Serpent Tongue Poor boy never held his tongue He was sent away with tears in his eyes And blood-slicked thighs Oh how his lovely virtue never thought of this. His innocent beauty so tainted The seed that was sowing within him The Devil's eye watched him secretly And he caressed his cheek with the cold rains It was God crying from the Devil's cruel punishment "Why has this been bestowed upon me?" he cries. But receives no answer, but the howling of the winds. Shattered brutally, he became hollow How could his fruitful lips be so bruised? Did he not notice the sighs that escaped those lips? Disgustingly wondrous ecstasy He was blinded... ...For he was isolated in the nothingness of his own identity He longs for the damp, dark depths of a grave His vain wish cannot be granted He was damned to wander the scorching coals of Hell. Trapped from his pretty visions of salvation How dare the Angel of Death yearn for his own demise? The angelic forces taunt him The line between good and evil blurs What has he really become? An angel of mercy or a monstrosity of Hell?
8 Comments
AmmyK
Dec 23, 2006 05:49 PM by: AmmyK chapter 1
Wow, that was really touching. If you were a poet, I bet you'd make millions. What kind of poem is this? Free-verse? Just Curious.
 
crazy_jamaican_gurl
Jul 16, 2006 08:43 PM by: crazy_jamaican_gurl chapter 1
somehow I am not surprised that this came from Cradle of Filth. Which song was it? I like it...the way you can just read right through it without any trouble. Faves.
 
BlAcK_RoSe_MaRy
Mar 20, 2006 11:16 AM by: BlAcK_RoSe_MaRy chapter 1
I think I love you!
 
InuandKagome4ever
Feb 16, 2006 03:29 PM by: InuandKagome4ever chapter 1
This is good!
I like it alot!
 
Ichidou_Daisuke
Jan 25, 2006 03:33 PM by: Ichidou_Daisuke chapter 1
Awesome poem. Loved the whole feel of it.
+Faves
 
hieisstrawberry
Jul 20, 2005 09:05 PM by: hieisstrawberry chapter 1
Wow, your use of vocabulary makes me happy! :3

Very, very, very genus poem! You have great writing talent, along with drawing. And, once stated again, I ENVY YOU! :favs:

dog. Lol xD
 
Gaidheal101
Jun 26, 2005 03:10 AM by: Gaidheal101 chapter 1
great poetry
 
Vampire-Queen-Gothika
May 26, 2005 01:22 PM by: Vampire-Queen-Gothika chapter 1
You uploaded it! Yay! I love this...it so pwns all my shoot XD
 

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