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Her Last Thoughts. by Ichidou_Daisuke
View as PDF, Submitted: 2005-10-31, Updated: 2005-10-31, Chapters: 1, Size: 1K, Words: 306, Comments: 12, Views: 209   
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I'll love you, even in death.
1 - Not Worthy of a Mausouleum
Her Last Thoughts. Darling, why don't I feel the fever anymore? Everything's as cold as ice now. I can no longer breathe and my chest is sore. But to open my eyes, I won't allow. Darling, why are there murmurs of sorrow? Maybe it's only my imagination. My strength has left and there's none to borrow. Oh how I adore this sensation. I'm lying defenseless with no regrets. Except that I can't hear your voice. I never thought this is how I'd pay my debts. But this wasn't ever to be a choice. Darling, I can't remember anything from before. All my memories are a blur. I can vaguely see the visions of blood and gore. No different than how we were. Darling, why do I smile about being devoured? Demon is leaving me a kiss. The thought of sleep leaves me empowered. For there's something here I'd miss. I'm lying defenseless with no regrets. Except that I can't hear your voice. I never thought this is how I'd pay my debts. But this wasn't ever to be a choice. Darling, will you be waiting in Hell for me? I know that's where we're going. You're proof of love, you'd never tell to me. Killing was your way of showing. Darling, do you think we took the wrong path? Because I'm content with this fate. Maybe this is what they mean by 'God's wrath'. Even though he was a bit late. I'm lying defenseless with no regrets. Except that I can't hear your voice. I never thought this is how I'd pay my debts. But this wasn't ever to be a choice.
12 Comments (Most recent 10). Show All
crazy_jamaican_gurl
Oct 12, 2006 01:07 PM by: crazy_jamaican_gurl chapter 1
That is very good...i like the line about waiting in Hell. Tis written like a masterpiece!
 
niou
Jan 13, 2006 08:39 AM by: niou chapter 1
this was my favorite line :
"Darling, will you be waiting in Hell for me?"
nice work ^^
 
orianajones
Jan 12, 2006 08:31 PM by: orianajones chapter 1
this is really sad and seems to be about having the heart blinded by love. sad but beautiful
luv ya orianajones
p.s. thanks for the coment on *dance of tears*, i may colour it in.
 
TsunachiSpiritHolder
Jan 1, 2006 05:40 PM by: TsunachiSpiritHolder chapter 1
so sad...i like it...greatest ever ^_^ heres a cookie *gives cookie*
 
dramaqueen101
Dec 22, 2005 06:42 AM by: dramaqueen101 chapter 1
Love this poem! *favs*
 
CodeCrush
Nov 14, 2005 09:00 PM by: CodeCrush chapter 1
Wow....... again..... LOL, i gotta get something new up in my head....
 
dms_cheeseshirted_chorusneko
Nov 6, 2005 07:29 PM by: dms_cheeseshirted_chorusneko chapter 1
That's beautiful, full of emotion, I heart it!*faves*
 
rinygrin
Nov 2, 2005 10:08 PM by: rinygrin chapter 1
Great Job! =( sad yet pretty
 
Nessa51189
Nov 1, 2005 07:00 PM by: Nessa51189 chapter 1
I am so glad you can. I'm glad I am getting through to someone out there.
 
Immortally_Broken
Nov 1, 2005 08:22 AM by: Immortally_Broken chapter 1
Ooo nice! It's creepy and sad but so good...My vocabulary isn't big enough to rhyme like that. Excellent poem/song thingy!
 
Xe
Oct 31, 2005 10:39 PM by: Xe chapter 1
... Show-off. D: Looking back at all my poems, I hate you. xD Awesome-est effer. x3
-kissu-
 
Cara
Oct 31, 2005 07:18 PM by: Cara chapter 1
I like it. Wonderful job. Here have a doughnut. *shoves a doughnut down your throat*
 

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