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Dancing in the Demon's Dream by Bix
View as PDF, Submitted: 2005-11-10, Updated: 2005-11-10, Chapters: 1, Size: 1K, Words: 150, Comments: 3, Views: 224   
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Kind of sad. Not really though. It doesn't really mean anything.
1 - Dancing
Dreaming's just imagination Tears are all that's real Like the distant cloud Loneliness is all I feel. The wind is chilly It blows so cold My shadow's slowly dying And my life is growing old. But shadows just are dancers In this sacred dance of fate And, oops, too bad I guess I'm a little late. The party's just begun A thousand years too soon And like the witches gathering We dance under the Harvest Moon. But the dancing isn't happy Full of weeping and cries And you don't quite understand the reasons The innocents has died. And the truth - it isn't out there Life's made up of lies Not much that's holy anymore Because life's not sanctified. The weeping's overwhelming The screaming grows abstain And it's getting harder and harder now For my sanity to retain.
3 Comments
stippie
Dec 13, 2005 12:09 PM by: stippie chapter 1
OMG! you are good at poetry. *favs*
 
Bix
Nov 11, 2005 07:49 PM by: Bix chapter 1
Thanks! If you guys like this one, let me know and I'll post some more. I love poems! They're fun to write, but I write metaphorically. Sometimes you'll have to read between the lines. They all tell a story about something!
 
Shinigami-no-Kaze
Nov 11, 2005 02:30 PM by: Shinigami-no-Kaze chapter 1
Thought I'd read some of your stuff--this caught my eye almost immediately because of a story of mine I'm writing with a friend. I really liked it. The rhyme scheme feels natural and unforced, and I like the lack of punctuation. A great poem. +fav
 

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