Nobody - Chapter 1 - Nobody

, Submitted: 2005-11-16, Updated: 2005-11-16, Chapters: 1, Size: 1K, Words: 99, Comments: 8, Views: 264
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This is a poem I made to be a message to everyone that feels alone, like nobody cares, enjoy!

1 - Nobody

Nobody Nobody loves you Nobody cares about you Nobody thinks twice of what you said or done Nobody tells you the truth Everybody lies to your face Nobody does… Nobody does… Nobody helps you get up when you are down Nobody puts you in a good mood when you have a frown Nobody wants to be friends with you Nobody cries when you are hurt Nobody will… Nobody will… Oh, by the way I just need to say one more thing. My name is Nobody, what's your's?

8 Comments

Mar 21, 2006 06:30 PM by: Chemical-sweet chapter 1

Wow, nice poem! I love the ending. it's very creative!
*faves*
~chemical-sweet~

Dec 21, 2005 12:21 PM by: Neawolf chapter 1

This is really clever

Nov 19, 2005 05:53 PM by: Xx_AviloriA_xX chapter 1

so creative! i love this one!

Nov 18, 2005 05:38 AM by: manga_cat_girl chapter 1

It is because I kinda have it like that! I am not friend's whit the tre people I was with at school...

Nov 17, 2005 06:27 PM by: Animanic chapter 1

Nice poem. and a good ending. I felt connected to the friend part.

Nov 17, 2005 11:53 AM by: manga_cat_girl chapter 1

That's so sad ;_;

Nov 17, 2005 10:35 AM by: govilshayla chapter 1

wow first i thought it was all deep and darky but then the fact that Nobody was a name...that was awesome you are very very creative im so faving this

Nov 16, 2005 06:28 PM by: Neko_King chapter 1

this poem means that even when you think nobody cares, SOMEBODY does.