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Bedtime by chibi_chick
Complete View as PDF, Submitted: 2006-07-16, Updated: 2006-10-12, Chapters: 1, Size: 3K, Words: 678, Comments: 13, Views: 719   Sexual Content: Mild Contains Yaoi/Shounen Ai/Slash
Anime/Manga (0) > Naruto series (2778) > Couples/Pairings (2189) > Yaoi, Yuri (801)
"Goodnight, Naruto" Sasuke wispered.

"Goodnight..."

*EDIT* I've rewritten it, because it's crap, now it's rewritten crap, yay.
1 - Stay with me, please
Writen from Naruto's POV- One shot, SasuNaru


I could feel his lips against my own. His skin was warm. He held me close to his half-naked body.Running his fingers through my messy yellow hair, he moved his lips to my chin, then to my neck.


I wrapped my arms around him, digging my nose into his collarbone. I sniffed him, he smelled like his favorite shampoo (vanilla) and a bit of mint, since he had just brushed his teeth, and me. He smelt like me. Maybe it was all the time we spent together, hugging, kissing, and of course we spent the most time trainning, he had started to smell like me, I liked it. I liked it becuase it made me feel like I was a part of him. A part of Sasuke.


I started playing with his hair, it made him angry, I laughed. It was always fun to tease Sasuke, he'd of course come up with a better comeback and get me angry, then he'd tell me I looked ''cute'' when I was angry. I just couldn''t stay mad at him, and he couldn't stay mad at me. Because he loved me.


We just laid there, enjoying the sound of the night, our breathing, and the owl in the forest a few blocks from his house. I hate silence, so I always try to be loud, because I don't feel so alone. Sasuke like it quiet, and together the silence isn't so bad. Being alone together isn't so bad.


I moved in with him a few weeks ago, actually he had forced me to live with him. I didn't mind. His house was really big and I couldn't imagine how it was like to like there all alone. I had lived in a small house, since that was all I could afford. I lived in the poor side of town, where there were lots of gangs. Sasuke didn't like that, so he forced me to live with him, it wasn't really forced though, since I happily brought all of my stuff over and moved in with him, though tonight wasn't the first time we had shared a bed.


I felt sleepy. Sasuke wakes up so early, before the sun even rises, I like to sleep in untill noon, but maybe that's because I like to stay up so late.


"Sasuke" I said in a low voice, he stopped licking my neck and looked at me.


"What?"


"I'm tired"


"I'll be right back, don't move." He walked out of the room, and then came back a few minutes later. I leaned up to see what he had. In his hand was my sleeping cap. I laughed. Sasuke walked over to the bed and laid down next to me.


"Wear this, Naruto" He put the hat on my head. I couldn't help but burst out laughing, Sasuke chuckled.

"But you hate it!" I said, Sasuke did hate it. When I showed it to him he frowned and asked 'what the hell is this?'

"But I love anything that you wear..."



I yawned. Sasuke put his arms around me, we were both tired. Kakashi had made us spar today and Sasuke and I are almost evenly matched, so we tire each other out. Sparring with Sasuke was always a challenge, he was stronger then me in some areas, but in others we were equal. Everyday we pushed each other harder, and became stronger together. We were growing up together.

I rubbed my face in his chest, he was breathing softly, I kissed him on the lips. It was soft and sweet, he tastes good.


"Goodnight Naruto" Sasuke whispered.


"Goodnight..."


And we fell asleep.


The end


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A/n-I've rewritten it, but I've only changed some things and added others, I still think it's crappy, but atleast it's an improvement.

Comment and I'll love you forever.

Thanks for reading this crap!

Toddle-loo!
13 Comments (Most recent 10). Show All
rainraingoaway
Jun 22, 2008 12:16 PM by: rainraingoaway chapter 1
Its not crap! I think its soo romantic! =]
 
kogalover2013
Apr 25, 2008 11:33 PM by: kogalover2013 chapter 1
omg i luv sasunaru
 
AmmyK
Jan 20, 2007 12:34 PM by: AmmyK chapter 1
Kawai!!!
 
Animerocker
Nov 20, 2006 01:37 PM by: Animerocker chapter 1
Aw Sasuke+Ocness=Kawaii I love this u rock
 
adam516510
Oct 12, 2006 04:44 PM by: adam516510 chapter 1
that was a good story
 
lamebabe101
Sep 4, 2006 10:44 AM by: lamebabe101 chapter 1
That's so sweet! Good job!
 
Tearole
Aug 26, 2006 04:52 PM by: Tearole chapter 1
aww so sweet
sob sob
 
bloodaroundthemoon
Aug 23, 2006 02:46 PM by: bloodaroundthemoon chapter 1
i don't like gay copules but i like this one it's sweet although i have no proble with gay people
 
sflower250
Aug 22, 2006 01:42 PM by: sflower250 chapter 1
aaaaaaaaaaaw it made me feel fuzzy inside :3
 
natkun
Aug 15, 2006 03:35 PM by: natkun chapter 1
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Hieis_lover_and_obsessor
Jul 18, 2006 09:57 PM by: Hieis_lover_and_obsessor chapter 1
Awww! Sasuke is so sweet! XD
 
waterangel843
Jul 16, 2006 03:31 PM by: waterangel843 chapter 1
awwwww so kawaii!!!!
 
Ana
Jul 16, 2006 05:35 AM by: Ana chapter 1
Aw, so sweet! Very good. Three mens up!
 

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