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War by Little_miss_angel
Complete View as PDF, Submitted: 2006-07-26, Updated: 2006-07-26, Chapters: 1, Size: 1K, Words: 142, Comments: 7, Views: 193   
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This is yet another poem about something that everyone fears so please listen to what I write and I hope u like it R&R ^_^
1 - War
War

A fight gone too far
Is how to describe war
All those innocent men
Just walking out the door
It starts with a simple fight
Two sides of the same story
Making it stronger and stronger
Until its something gory
The sounds of guns rattle in my head
Keeping me awake
Thinking of all those soldiers
Putting their lives at stake
We all have the power
To end this endless fight
To quickly call a truce
In the dark of night
The trumpets will sound, the bells ring
In perfect harmony
The soldiers will come back
For all of us to see
I know this day will come
That we anticipate
But war still rages on
So we just have to wait
By: Little_miss_angel
7 Comments
RumikoAkura
Aug 4, 2006 03:53 AM by: RumikoAkura chapter 1
That's really cool. My brother was a soldier (luckily, he's out of the Navy now) but my sister's husband is still in the army, and he's a battlefield technician. He got sent to Afghanistan 3 days after they got married, but he's home safe now.
 
It's always nice to know, and quite ironic to know, that the younger generation have more sense than the elder. Seriously, we should rule the country.
 
RikusShadow
Jul 31, 2006 06:46 AM by: RikusShadow chapter 1
wow that poem really TOUCHED THE SOUL! *sniffle* i wish i could write poetry! lol i tried once and it sucked really bad but it was just for a joke.
 
jamacainprincess
Jul 30, 2006 11:40 AM by: jamacainprincess chapter 1
omg u should write poems more often this is really sad i love it *+favs*
 
AmayaAsakura
Jul 29, 2006 02:23 PM by: AmayaAsakura chapter 1
You have a strong Talent For writing Poems! ^_^ I really loved this one! It was really Sad though :( *fave* Keep Writing! ^_^
 
KillerPanda
Jul 28, 2006 07:16 PM by: KillerPanda chapter 1
Oh wow!*Sniff sniff*That's so so sad.Waaaaaaaaaaaaaa!What a good job!Your so awesome at poems!
 
inuyasha_naruto_lover
Jul 27, 2006 02:18 PM by: inuyasha_naruto_lover chapter 1
dude, this is making me almost come to tears!
And I NEVER almost come to tears!
this is awesome!

you are very good at poems!!! -favs-
 
Sparkly_Bubble_Butterfly
Jul 26, 2006 01:29 PM by: Sparkly_Bubble_Butterfly chapter 1
Wow. Awesome. You might as well have posted it since you didn't get to read it in the talent show. And even though I've said this before, it was amazing.
 

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