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Demons on the Outside by setokaibaslittlesis
View as PDF, Submitted: 2006-08-08, Updated: 2008-06-22, Chapters: 25, Size: 202K, Words: 40876, Comments: 110, Views: 1804   
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Keiko lived in the leaf village for many happy, quiet years. Then the day after she passes her genin exam, everything goes horribly wrong. Thought to be mentally unstable, she is barred from passing the normal way. Can she get through it all and become a better person?
1 - The Name Means Lucky: Barred From Passing
Chapter One: The Name means Lucky: Barred from Passing!

Naruto was failing miserably at his cloning jutsu. Again. And this time it was a million times worse because it was genin exam. Keiko couldnt help but feel sorry for him. When your best friend was Hinata, you spent half your time stalking the poor little guy. She glanced over at her friend and saw that Hinata was close to tears. Come on, lets get out of here. She said. They had both already finished and passed, but Hinata had insisted on staying to watch Naruto. She nodded and they left.
The two girls on the path didnt attract much attention. One was quiet Hinata Hyuga and the other was the strange little girl who had been found in the Forest of Death at the age of five. Her name was Keiko, but no one knew what clan she was from, as she didnt have a clan symbol. She wore a black body suit, along with short khaki shots and a small khaki vest with lots of pockets. She also wore black gloves, and the standard navy blue sandals. Her long black hair was tied into a braid that fell to her waist and long bangs. She had tied a navy blue ribbon around her forehead were her headband would soon be. The only stand out thing about her was a solid white wolf pup trotting at her heels. The wolf had six red glowing eyes.
Thanks for making me feel better. Hinata said, I am going to go home now. See you tomorrow!
Oh! Bye. Keiko said. Balki, her wolf, yipped excitedly.
See you tomorrow, too, Balki. Hinata giggled.
***

Keiko was awaked the next morning by a sharp rap on the door. She wondered who it was. Only Kakashi and Hinata cared enough to know where she lived and neither of them got up this early, especially Kakashi. She yawned and walked to the door. She opened it to see Hinatas smiling face.
Good morning! Ready to see the team postings? she asked
Sure, let me get dressed&
Okay, but hurry up. I want to make sure I wasnt blocked. Keiko froze, heart pounding, before she found enough voice to say:
Can they do that?
Oh, yes Hinata said, oblivious to the effect her words had had on her friend, They get the accused and all the teachers and even the Hokage together. Then they hear the reason why someone wants them blocked and then they vote.
Oh. Right. Keiko said, pulling her vest over her head and walking out, Ready to go?
***

As they walked towards the academy, they had fun discussing future team mates. Hinata wanted Naruto, and Keiko did an impression of what Ino and Sakura would do if either of them got on Sasukes team. When they finally got there, Hinata rushed up to the post. Her face fell slightly as she read out loud, Kiba and Shino. Keiko nodded:
Shinos a freak. But Kibas okay. She walked to the list. Keiko stopped, heart beating. She looked again. She wasnt there!
Hinata! she said, panic creeping into her voice as she turned around.
Guess again! She found herself face to face with a much older shinobi. Quick as a wink, he grabbed, bound, blindfolded, and threw her over his shoulder. With a flick of his fingers, they disappeared in a puff of smoke.
***

They reappeared again in a forest clearing. He unceremoniously dropped to the ground, where she rolled and balanced on her feet, arms bound behind her, unable to see because of the blindfold.
Can we get on with this, Kakashi? You are the one who called us all here. She heard the voice of the Hokage. Balki stopped yipping and said, disbelievingly thought the mental link he shared with Keiko, Kakashi? He betrayed us?
Oh, yes, pardon me. Kakashi said in his bored drawl, I believe this girl is too dangerous to be allowed to pass.
Now what proof do you have of that? the Hokage asked
She is an Ookami, part of a forbidden clan Kakashi said simply
But the Ookami killed each other off six years ago! someone said
No. This little girl killed them all. The whenever a child in that clan connects mentally with a wolf, an adult seals the blood jutsu inside it. You see, Ookami have two types of chakra: normal chakra, and demon chakra. If they use the demon chakra, they lose complete control. At one point, all the adults killed their wolves, deciding the wolves created the chakra. When one little girl found the last wolf, the clan turned on her, trying to kill her and the wolf. Understanding the link, the little girl called upon the chakra in the wolf, not knowing she had her own. The Ookami did not kill each other, Keiko killed them all.
Thats a lie! she burst out, unable to take it any longer, I didnt kill anyone!
I dont know, Kakashi, weve never had any problems with her in class. She doesnt even use Balki. Hes kind of a let down as far as wolves go. Iruka said
Shes too dangerous! Kakashi shouted
Enough! yelled the Hokage, We will compromise! Keiko, you may continue your training, but you will do it alone. You will not have a team.
What? Most of the tests from here on out are based around teams! Keiko cried
And you will not have a teacher either. Kakashi will check on your progress every once and a while.
What?! Kakashi and Keiko said together
Take it or leave it.
FINE! Keiko shouted, ripping the blindfold off. Then she ran sobbing into the forest. Balki glared at Kakashi for a moment before chasing after her.
5 Comments
setokaibaslittlesis
Mar 9, 2008 10:05 AM by: setokaibaslittlesis chapter 1
ON NOES!
I deleted the GOOD chapter one!
NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!
 
ladychaos
Dec 21, 2007 12:28 PM by: ladychaos chapter 1
that's a shame they arn't letting her pass, poor Keiko
 
setokaibaslittlesis
Sep 28, 2006 01:51 PM by: setokaibaslittlesis chapter 1
Oh my gosh. This chapter is so horribly written even I can't stand it.
 
setokaibaslittlesis
Sep 28, 2006 01:49 PM by: setokaibaslittlesis chapter 1
Meh. I can't get the first fist chapter to delete. curse you FAC system! Please read the one that says something at the top about editing instead. The Original was full of things that weren't realistic.
 
cherryblossom93
Sep 27, 2006 04:36 PM by: cherryblossom93 chapter 1
thats great! please write more! ^_^
 

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