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The First Meet by SkyGirl
View as PDF, Submitted: 2006-11-02, Updated: 2006-11-02, Chapters: 2, Size: 4K, Words: 1008, Comments: 9, Views: 360   
Cartoons (742) > Xiaolin Showdown (1053) > Fan Characters (OC's) (685)
This is the story i am starting
2 - Whata whata who
                           whata whata who            1. when i first creeped out i new i wouldn't be caught because jack was snooring so loud people in texas could here it. i feel bad for my fellow americans. anyways the first thing i saw was a wierd gloove with no match i picked it up i put it on my hand and i felt a slit of paper on it. it said this shen gong wu is the fist off temigong point it at something and say its name punch and it will be a thosand times harder. after reading that i said out loud whata whata who? is this a game or some thing? i'll just take this with me. as i walked on i found some stairs thay lead to a basement so i went in i was shocked at what i found. A cowboy, brazilen, bald dude and some japaness girl in a little bubble containment device. i did what any girl would do go up and tap on it. then the bald dude said use the fist. i said WHAT!!!??? then he yelled back USE THE FISTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT. so they stould back i put the glove on right and yelled fist of temigong it worked it broke it. it was the hardest punch ever. and soon before i new it i was wobbling around the fist was to stronge for me. so after wobbling alot i fell. as soon as i did i herd a annoying voice say who let the monks out. i looked up at the gang and said jacks right behind me isn't he.in a low tone. they did a group nod. then the cowboy helped me to my feet. jack was furicruse at me freeing       2. his prisoners he keep yelling i new you were bad luck. i got realy mad after the hundreth time and went up to him and teimgonged him right in the face he was down and i didn't fall this time. then i said looks like he does have an of switch and smilied. right after i said that the so called monks told me their names the cowboy is clay, the brazilian is raimondo, the bold dude is opi i mean omi he he sorry, and the japenesses girl is kimiko. so i said my name is jess and you wouldn't happen to have a place to stay i think i wore my stay permite in this place. Then kimiko said you can stay with us you'd make a great monk. After that omi declaired thats the last one right. Everyone kinda just tuned that out. Then I said well do you have a way to get home because frankly i don'y know how i got here.
4 Comments
Sonicxgrl11
Dec 17, 2006 05:31 PM by: Sonicxgrl11 chapter 2
i like it write more :D
 
TallestPurple
Dec 5, 2006 02:57 PM by: TallestPurple chapter 2
*waits fur next chapter* 0_0 Anyhow I love it so far :D
 
V1k
Nov 26, 2006 02:27 PM by: V1k chapter 2
NEAT!
 
Tachzaruu
Nov 24, 2006 12:31 PM by: Tachzaruu chapter 2
well, i fink that speechmarks and spellcheck might make it easier to read, but besides that, its good so far, and your good at building up suspense.
 

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