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Demons on the Outside by setokaibaslittlesis
View as PDF, Submitted: 2006-08-08, Updated: 2008-06-22, Chapters: 25, Size: 202K, Words: 40876, Comments: 110, Views: 1804   
Anime/Manga (0) > Naruto series (2778) > Fan Characters (OC's) (5197)
Keiko lived in the leaf village for many happy, quiet years. Then the day after she passes her genin exam, everything goes horribly wrong. Thought to be mentally unstable, she is barred from passing the normal way. Can she get through it all and become a better person?
6 - Out of the Action: The Shortest Chapter EVER!
Chapter Six: Out of the Action: The Shortest Chapter EVER!

(Okay, I admit it. Im too lazy to write the whole long Zabuza thing. Im already sick of this Zabuza/Haku arc. I wanna get to the Chunnin Exams, so pardon the rather obvious cop-out. XD)

Its okay, you can get up now. Came Kakashis sigh, Our ride is here. Four heads popped up, first Sakura, then Sasuke, then Keiko, and finally, after a considerable pause, Naruto. Sitting on the back of the misty river was a small motorized boat, Kakashi and Tazuna already sitting next to a man in the back with a wooden row in his hand. Grumbling, the pre-teens made their way into the boat. Balki slowly walked up the ramp and then dove into Keikos lap, whimpering.
Whats up with him? Sasuke asked, pointing towards the shivering ball of white.
Hes afraid of water. Keiko said, stroking Balkis ears, I dont really know why.
Well, hell be of no use to us that way. Let me help with that. Kakashi said, bringing his fist onto Balkis head with a loud, Ca-THUMP! Keiko heard the thump and felt herself sliding into darkness&
4 Comments
FluffysPrincess2968
Mar 7, 2008 06:42 PM by: FluffysPrincess2968 chapter 6
nooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!! ;_;
 
ladychaos
Dec 21, 2007 01:06 PM by: ladychaos chapter 6
WTF! Kakashi is a jerk hitting Balki like that, poor little guy
 
finalfantasy
Jul 5, 2007 09:15 PM by: finalfantasy chapter 6
omg! after this, im gonna HATE kakashi!
 
cherryblossom93
Apr 6, 2007 04:21 PM by: cherryblossom93 chapter 6
Eep! Kakashi doesn't like puppies very much, does he? STOP HITTING THE PUPPY! IT'S A PUPPY! You don't hit puppies, you just don't. Sicko. Lol, sorry, but I have two dogs (one of which is a puppy). Sorry for the lateness of my comment...But great chapters! Okay, I only have one small piece of advice that you really don't have to listen to, cause it isn't a big deal. If you feel like it, space everything out a little more. It makes the story look longer and it's easier to read. Just a suggestion, because I know that I want some critism from people on my stories...All I get are compliments or threats when I don't update fast enough...Mostly threats...(I'm afraid to sleep at night...)XD
 

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