O_O Dun...dun...DUN!!!

Wow. This story is sooooo awesome! Please continue!!! ^^

OMG I'M SO HYPER TODAY I HAD 2 BUTTERFINGERS, 2 CUPS OF HAWIIAN PUNCH, 3 ICE CREAM SANDWICHES, 5 SNICKERS. 5 HERSHEYS, A BOTTLE OF CHOCO SYRUP, SOME CARROTS(Those make me hyper too) AND LOTS AND LOTS OF LOLIPOPS!

YEYEYEYEYY!


KEWL SOTRYRYEJNDilas fhaweitf~

Sorry 'bout not being able to read it. I was busy, and I'm reading it now, tho I'm only on chapter 4-5. Lol.
I really like it! Tobi. *sigh* Never leave kunai knives lying around! :p

I WANNA BE IN IT

hmmm...interesting!^^
I'll read the rest whence i get the chancE!^^

O.o Poor Nara-chan. WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED TO HER THAT MADE HER LOSE KIBA?

Oh okay! Yeah Tobi is cute!^__^
Keep up with the story though, nice job!

it's descriptive. very good start! ^_^

Wow! That was really good!^__^
I enjoyed this story!
It has a very well made up story line.
I really like Kiba.. that's sad that he died, along with everyone else.:(
Oooo she was kidnapped by Kisame!!! lol
Keep it up! Really good so far^___^

Actually, Kiba didn't die. There was an incident with Nara's demon, so now everyone that had once trusted her now hates and shuns her, except for maybe Rock Lee.

0_o....it stopped....NOOOO!lol this was so good!when's the next one coming out?!^^