Chapter 1 - The Traitor
Submitted June 20, 2007 Updated June 20, 2007 Status Complete | A free-verse poem I wrote based on the actions of Jacen Solo during the Legacy of the Force series. Corresponding Image: http://www.fanart-central.net/pic-595388.html |
Chapter 1 - The Traitor
Chapter 1 - The Traitor
The Traitor
Betrayal,
Like a knife in the dark,
Unseen until too late.
Black clad soldiers, march the streets,
Fear is all around.
Their leader, their master,
He is a traitor.
People want to flee, others want to stay,
It makes no difference.
Death, destruction,
It cannot be escaped.
Nothing will stop them.
A flash of white,
A splat of red,
It's a casualty of war.
But who is fighting?
No one.
Just the army men.
Civilians scatter,
Terrified.
Who would do this?
Their leader, the Traitor.
Why?
Who knows?
Sorrow, sadness,
They follow,
In his wake.
His evil,
Knows no bounds.
No one can stop him.
Betrayal,
Like a knife in the dark,
Unseen until too late.
Black clad soldiers, march the streets,
Fear is all around.
Their leader, their master,
He is a traitor.
People want to flee, others want to stay,
It makes no difference.
Death, destruction,
It cannot be escaped.
Nothing will stop them.
A flash of white,
A splat of red,
It's a casualty of war.
But who is fighting?
No one.
Just the army men.
Civilians scatter,
Terrified.
Who would do this?
Their leader, the Traitor.
Why?
Who knows?
Sorrow, sadness,
They follow,
In his wake.
His evil,
Knows no bounds.
No one can stop him.
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FreakyMonkey on May 3, 2010, 12:22:05 AM
FreakyMonkey on
Your a great at poet. I dont even know what its talking about but its really good! Like as said by Midnight_Chaos Quote "Again, your choice of words is amazing. They really tie in well ^_^ Keep it up ok!!" I agree.Midnight_Chaos on June 29, 2007, 7:39:55 PM
I don't really know who Jacen Solo is, but I still love this poem nonetheless. Again, your choice of words is amazing. They really tie in well ^_^ Keep it up ok!! (Although...I don't know if you like poetry all that much lol)GreyJedi on June 30, 2007, 5:21:23 AM
GreyJedi on
Jacen is a character from the expanded universe of Star Wars, meaning he doesn't actually appear in the movies. I know that you're not all that well versed in Star Wars, so I'll just leave it there. I'm glad you liked the poem. Thanks :D