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Hell by goddess_of_bacon
View as PDF, Submitted: 2004-03-25, Updated: 2004-03-25, Chapters: 1, Size: 1K, Words: 113, Comments: 1, Views: 92   
Miscellaneous (4012) > Writing (289) > Poetry (113)
just a simple poem with i think is pretty good check it out.
1 - Hell
I’m stumbling over all the bodies,
All the bones just lying all over the floor,

I’m calling,
But no one answers,

But still I wonder,
Who did this?
Why?
What happened?

Why am I here?
Why aren’t I dead?

While walking I fall,
I fall through a whole,
A dark black whole,
It swallowed me up into darkness,

It still smelled of death and hatred,
And then a body,
A dark body,
It seemed like just a shadow,

It stabbed me,
But I did not feel,
I felt nothing,
Only did I feel the bodies,
The bones under my feet,

Then I feel,
And I became a prisoner to this cave of death.
1 Comments
me_miroku_luver_01
Apr 9, 2004 04:51 PM by: me_miroku_luver_01 chapter 1
THATS GOOD...BETTA THAN MINE...LOL, WELL THANKS FOR COMMENTING ON MINE....WELL THATS GOOD (REALLY GOOD):p
 

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