dark thoughts - Chapter 1 - Dark thoughts

1 - Dark thoughts

dark thoughts lurk
around in time,
my troubled soul
my tortured mind.

no one will ever
feel my pain
so i'll run away,
and hide in the shadows again.

you can lock me up
you can tie me down
but imprinted on my face
shall remain a frown.

i COULD scream,
i COULD die,
i COULD live
but i WILL cry.

7 Comments

Mar 7, 2006 12:14 AM by: dark1567 chapter 1

your good i like the darkness it is a vary apelling poem you should wright more of them.

dark

May 16, 2005 11:22 PM by: Lanfear chapter 1

wow, that's an awesome poem, i know how you feel there, i have quite a few of these poems in my section ;). Love how you did it in 1 stanza, really good rhythm too. Lanfear

Apr 16, 2005 04:49 PM by: ILoveAang chapter 1

OMG how did you write that poem you should be a professional i meen those words were deep i know i could never have came up with your choice of words.....

Sep 10, 2004 03:08 PM by: Hacker_Crystal chapter 1

-blink blink- whoa..... -blink blink- thats.....AWESOME!

Aug 9, 2004 10:44 PM by: currupted chapter 1

this an awsome poem and i will defietly add this to my favs. :p

Apr 24, 2004 08:23 PM by: SS5DIABLO chapter 1

this would make a good part in slipknot song tatterted and tourn
I dont think i spelled that right

Apr 24, 2004 11:48 AM by: BloodySunAngel chapter 1

You rule! *sniffs* YOU ROCK!
Your the best! I'm going to make something for you!
Not sure what, but something!