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A Shadow Incarnate by bookworm369
Complete View as PDF, Submitted: 2007-10-18, Updated: 2007-10-23, Chapters: 1, Size: 1K, Words: 191, Comments: 19, Views: 344   
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OK so i had THE WEIRDEST dream where i died and then live on as my shadow and....well you'll see....if youreone of those happy people you might not like this, its one of my more darkish writings...
1 - A Shadow Incarnate
Awake but dead
A shadow instead;
My body has long since gone.
Still I survive
On death I thrive;
I walk the earth till dawn.
 
The lessons I learn;
For blood I yearn
I cannot walk in day.
So my body stands still
And waits to fulfill
This longing to find my prey. 
 
But my mind and my heart
Are set apart
In this struggle within my soul
But instinct wins
And so it begins:
I now carry out my goal.
 
So against my will
I start to kill
From dusk till dawn each night.
My body it seems
Too great a being
For my heart alone to fight. 
 
This conflict within,
Now reaching the brim,
I pause and hold my breath.
I cannot restrain
Nor bear so much pain;
My sanctuary is death. 

But a shadow am I,
I cannot die;
I sit here with my scars.
It’s too much pain
Just to remain
Stuck beneath the stars. 

So every night
I try to fight
This undying desire to kill.
And corpses all
Will begin to fall
‘Til no more blood can spill.
13 Comments (Most recent 10). Show All
Invader_Mira
Nov 13, 2007 01:46 PM by: Invader_Mira chapter 1
Wow it makes me want to stare out a window and just think about what it would be like to live a life like that...I think now I'll read your newest stuff and work down. Hehehe...work down...

FAVS***
 
YamiRevea
Nov 9, 2007 03:00 PM by: YamiRevea chapter 1
I LOVE THIS!! Very beautiful, I have dreams like these sometimes... *Faves*
 
YoriXYamiForever
Oct 30, 2007 09:13 PM by: YoriXYamiForever chapter 1
Dude, you're amazing! Everything you write is so full of feeling, this especially so! I love it! Dark and emotional *favs* ^^
 
nextguardian
Oct 24, 2007 08:42 PM by: nextguardian chapter 1
Great stuff!
 
zuvelioke
Oct 22, 2007 02:37 AM by: zuvelioke chapter 1
i also write poems about my dreams ...^^
 
cassydiddles
Oct 21, 2007 05:42 PM by: cassydiddles chapter 1
i like it. its different to the ones i'm used to
 
xEmotional
Oct 20, 2007 07:37 AM by: xEmotional chapter 1
wow, i like it, good job ;]
 
wolfmoon
Oct 18, 2007 05:57 PM by: wolfmoon chapter 1
Dude. Story of my life... Stupid full moon! *glares out window*
 
goth4ever
Oct 18, 2007 05:35 PM by: goth4ever chapter 1
.............WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Its so dark and wonderfull! You should publish something like this! Its fantastic
 
sexxygirl93
Oct 18, 2007 04:34 PM by: sexxygirl93 chapter 1
i love this 1 its so dark
 
EmeraldGreenSky
Oct 18, 2007 02:40 PM by: EmeraldGreenSky chapter 1
That's really good! You ever think about writing a book of poetry? You really should!
 
KelekiahGaladrian
Oct 18, 2007 02:30 PM by: KelekiahGaladrian chapter 1
Kel: Wow, that is dark. I like it. Good job. ^^
 
Blackwolfmoon
Oct 18, 2007 02:29 PM by: Blackwolfmoon chapter 1
^^ *is left speechless* THIS IS THE BEST YET! *extremly big hug* perfection
and ya know what... i had a dream like this last night o.O" xD great minds dream a like!
 

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