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Pain by bookworm369
Complete View as PDF, Submitted: 2007-11-03, Updated: 2007-11-03, Chapters: 1, Size: 1K, Words: 129, Comments: 13, Views: 240   
Miscellaneous (5196) > Writing (311) > Poetry (123)
XD Definitely not one of my better works...but its ok...comment please^^
1 - Pain
Floating in the darkness
I am alone,
Save the lost souls
And tormented spirits
That swim around me,
Crying out for help.
I try to reach out
And comfort them,
But I cannot.
I am restricted
By my own fears;
By my own pain.
I look on as
They scream in pain;
My heart tears in two
As I begin to recognize
These hapless souls.
They are the souls
Of those I care about
Swirling around me
In a torrential hurricane
Of pain, suffering,
And misfortune.
My soul cries out to them,
I want to join them,
But I am condemned
To forever be imprisoned
In this corporeal vessel.
I know I will never
Be free of pain:
I only want to lessen it;
To fly among the dead.
11 Comments (Most recent 10). Show All
Invader_Mira
Nov 13, 2007 02:23 PM by: Invader_Mira chapter 1
Oh wow. I think I'm in love! -huggles u- I wish I could things like this....I'd be famous by now! XD

FAVS***
 
wolfmoon
Nov 6, 2007 06:47 PM by: wolfmoon chapter 1
Yuo aren't suicidal are you?
 
uchihagirl
Nov 5, 2007 03:56 PM by: uchihagirl chapter 1
amazing as always ^^ *huggs yet again*
 
KelekiahGaladrian
Nov 5, 2007 02:44 PM by: KelekiahGaladrian chapter 1
Ouch. That held a lot of emotion. But ouch. I like it though. Good job!
 
DawnAngel
Nov 4, 2007 01:20 PM by: DawnAngel chapter 1
God! you're good at this stuff!!
I loved it... you know what you're doing so keep at it!
=3
 
eriepilot44
Nov 4, 2007 06:59 AM by: eriepilot44 chapter 1
that is verry talented.

i am in awe.
 
LoveWolves
Nov 4, 2007 06:38 AM by: LoveWolves chapter 1
Cool I love it ^^
 
sexxygirl93
Nov 3, 2007 06:19 PM by: sexxygirl93 chapter 1
wow greatness like allways big bruder
love all the pain its like i Feel wat ur saying
*xHUGGx*
 
Blackwolfmoon
Nov 3, 2007 06:08 PM by: Blackwolfmoon chapter 1
very nice J.T very nice
 
YoriXYamiForever
Nov 3, 2007 06:07 PM by: YoriXYamiForever chapter 1
I love it! As usual! ^^ It reminds me of Hades's pool of souls. Full of feeling and pain (no pun intended) Keep it up! More! ^^
 

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