Ok people here it finally is! My revamped story Sailor Moon C! here are a few differences between the new and old versions:
1. I'm using the Japanese stuff from the Japanese version and the manga so I'm doing a refernce on this chappie to show who's who. Also a few SLIGHT changes because of the manga:
1. In my story the Starlighta will be GIRLS because that's what they were in the manga and that causes less complications.
2. I'm putting what they all say in different colors so here's a guide:
Usagi-Serena
Ami-Amy
Rei-Raye
Makoto-Lita
Minako-Mina
Haruka-Amara
Michiru-Michelle
Setsuna-Trista
Hotaru
Rini-Chibiusa
Aqua
Mamoru-Darien
Also, The Moon Kingdom was rebuilt by the scouts in the end of the first manga so if you here them mentioning the Moon Kingdom know it's alive and thriving! Also, I'm using some really cool attacks they had that were exclusive to the manga so here's what they are:
Venus: Rolling Heart Vibration! Venus Wink Chain Sword!
Mercury: Mercury Aqua Mirage! Shine Snow Illusion!
Mars: Mars Snake Fire!
Jupiter: Jupiter Coconuts Cyclone! Flower Hurricane!
Uranus: Space Turbulance!
Neptune: Submarine Violin Tide!
Pluto: Garnet Ball! Dark Dome Close! Chronos Typhoon!
Tuxedo Kamen: Tuxedo La Smoking Bomber!
Chibi Moon: Pink Lady Freezing Kiss!
Princess Kakyuu: Starlights Royal Straight Flush! Kinmoku Fusion Tempest!
And a couple of other things: In the manga Chibi Moon got an eternal form like Sailor Moon so I'm keeping that and the fact that in the manga the Amazoness Quartette were actually her protectors.

Also, here's the Japanese words I'm using:
minna: everyone
henshin: transform
yaamede: stop it!
ohayo: good morning
moshi moshi: hello (on the phone only)
ja ne: see you! (ja means bye)
ichigo: strawberry
onegai: please
daigobu: all right
himi-sama: a term that means princess
yume: dream
youma: monster
arigato: thank you
shikaiste: hold on
demo: but
kobanwa: good evening
gomen: sorry
gomenasai: I'm sorry
ashiteru: I love you
makenai: don't give up!
matte: wait
abunai: watch out!
daigobu desu ka: are you alright?
daigobu desu: it's alright/I'm ok
doushite: why?
damare: shut up!
do itamashite: your welcome!
gambate: good luck/work hard
hajimemashite: How are you?
hayaku: hurry
iie: no
ikamashou: let's go!
Imuoto: younger sister
itai: ouch
senshi: soldier
fuku: sailor uniform
Ginzuishou: Imperium Silver Crystal
kawaii: cute
kawaii ni: so cute!
masaka: no way!
matsudai: forever
ne: no
neko: cat
sayonara: goodbye (final)
suki da: I love you
yoshi: alright
kouhi/kisaki: term meaning queen
ookasan: mom
okashi: candy
hitsu: It's a secret