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shadow curtain by Gaara351
View as PDF, Submitted: 2008-01-10, Updated: 2008-05-11, Chapters: 4, Size: 6K, Words: 1529, Comments: 34, Views: 445   
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this is actually one of my dreams maybe a chapter a month
2 - the practice
When I got home from school that day i changed into some shorts snd walked my palmarainean. I took her inside and i went into deep woods. In my apartment complex are some very painful and deep woods. No one goes back there so I decided to practice here.
My idea was to play hide and seek with ninjas and a samuri. The ninjas were close to Gaara and Shikamaru. I equipped the ninja with katanas, Kunai, Shuriken, And Demon Wind Shuriken. To survive this I would have to be quick on my wits.
I ran through the woods no doubt i was closely followed and i had to risk a tecnique that was very dangerous. I had to disappear into the shodow realm. Were only shikamaru can enter and then we would face off. Hopefully that wont happen.
The shadow realm is the exact opposite of the real world. Viney woods become clear woods. To any one else your just a shadow on the ground. After wandering around fo 30 minutes i see shikamaru down the way. We assumed the fighting positions and he readied some kunai and shuriken. Before he threw them in a blind fury I shot a web of lightning. Before I could see if it hit i dissapear into the real world.
Gaara was standing there. OH CRAP! I was caght by his sand clone and from my eyes, for the firt time, came a concentrated beam of lighning that looked like a laser beam. He flew back 10 feet. When he hit the ground he disappeared in a cloud of smoke.
Now my question was were was the samuri. Im the only one who can make him disappear. *scream* Oh no. I raced toward the manish scream. It was the samuri slaughter by an i-dont-know-what. By his body wich just disappeared in a puff of smoke was a line of sand.
I followed the trail and stood amazed at what could be a cousin of the chucaku.
To leave this forest I had one thing to do.To leave I had to kill this demon and take the mutation gene and find out who this is.
I knew this would be a fierce battle.
8 Comments
SakuraBlossom
Feb 13, 2008 03:11 PM by: SakuraBlossom chapter 2
heh...looks like you got the second chapter done hmmm
 
mexmyselfxandxIZ
Feb 5, 2008 02:36 PM by: mexmyselfxandxIZ chapter 2
awesome!!! i so can't wait for the next chapter!!!
 
CrimsonDot
Jan 17, 2008 10:15 AM by: CrimsonDot chapter 2
Wow! Gettin' intense. Keep writing!
 
Hinata102
Jan 15, 2008 08:33 PM by: Hinata102 chapter 2
ya i agree with sisaTao that you are getting a little better at the details in this chapter but it still seems to rushed and since when is this Naruto i got confused when i saw that you may have to change things around a little like to where only a warrior/demon by the name bla bla bla could enter  like i felt a serge run up my spine and out my eyelids to demonstrate the lazor eyes or whatever it was maybe you should try to turn this into a manga I could help although i do not know how to get the thing in manga format but I could try making the first chapter of your story in a manga form p.s don't blame me how cruddy i may make them
 
sisaTao
Jan 15, 2008 07:55 PM by: sisaTao chapter 2
Sweet! Your getting better with details.=] Love it Cody!xD
 

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