Sakura's birthday - Chapter 1 - Half of Sakura' birthday

, Submitted: 2008-01-15, Updated: 2008-01-20, Chapters: 1, Size: 1K, Words: 205, Comments: 15, Views: 271
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This is good to me what do u think?^^

1 - Half of Sakura' birthday

Chapter 1: Half of Sakura's birthday Sakura: WAKE UP SASUKE! Sasuke: ahhhhh!-falls out of bed- Happy birthday Sakura! Sakura: Yay you remembered unlike Naruto! Sasuke: That’s because Naruto is an idiot! Sakura: hehehehehe your so funny sasuke -sits on the couch- Sasuke: I got you a present! Sakura: OMG really! Sasuke: yup Sakura: yay! But ill open it later Sasuke: oh ok! Naruto:-knocks on Sasuke's bedroom door- Sasuke: What?!?! Naruto - walks in- OMG what where you doing in here with sakura? She is my woman! Sakura: Dream on Naruto! Sasuke: Yeah she's my girl! Sakura: OMG! Sasuke: OMG! Naruto: OMG! Neji who was watching the whole time: OMG! - Falls out of the tree he was in- aaaaahhhh! Sakura: oh my god Neji! Sasuke: What the heck was he in a tree for! Naruto: Because I told him to spy on you good thing you didn’t do anything to my woman! Sakura: I’m not you woman idiot! Sasuke: Naruto get out of my room! Naruto: Not unless Sakura comes with me! Sasuke: No UNLIKE YOU I rembered her birthday u idiot now leave us alone! -Shoves naruto out the window-

9 Comments

Jan 20, 2008 05:59 PM by: sasusakuAMOR chapter 1

hahaha naruto got shoved out the window! XD

Jan 20, 2008 05:18 PM by: Zoey101 chapter 1

omg this is so funny i was laugthing mostly at Naruto lol good job

Jan 20, 2008 04:29 PM by: UltimateNinja chapter 1

funny

Jan 20, 2008 02:23 PM by: XDarkTinkerbellX chapter 1

funny and cute XD

Jan 20, 2008 01:25 PM by: Meesaw chapter 1

Hahaha
The four of them shouting "OMG" was the best part in my opinion. It gave a hilarious image.

You should try illustrating this, like a comic. I think that'd be neat ^^

Jan 20, 2008 12:21 PM by: eriepilot44 chapter 1

cyute!

i like it :D

Jan 20, 2008 12:09 PM by: eeveelova4 chapter 1

lol thats funny u should keep writing

Jan 20, 2008 12:00 PM by: sasuke4kun chapter 1

LOL
i love it so like naruto and sasuke
and sakura of couse but neji hahahah that was great didnt expect to actually listen to naruto and spy on people i love that twist.
cant wait to see whats next.
please inform me when you do write another chapter.
yay you!!!
oo and thanks for all the comments on my pics.

Jan 20, 2008 11:55 AM by: zerotimberwolf chapter 1

lmao!! Naruto is such an idiot!