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, Submitted: 2008-02-02, Updated: 2008-02-02, Chapters: 1, Size: 1K, Words: 209, Comments: 3, Views: 155 Violence: Mild

Miscellaneous (4018) > Gothic/Romantic (1958)

This is something I wrote about my life which is unfortunetly a nightmare and the only thing I do about it is write poetry and draw shoot. I'm so lazy

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Blind by the darkness that surrounds me
Wondering if this is a dream
Everything's wrong it seems
Sometimes it feels like I don't belong
Like for some reason I was built wrong
I don't understand anything
and I want to knw everything

I'm falling apart
I'm losing my mind
This is not
What I had in mind

Life to me is always wrong
Still I don't feel I belong
Never have I had a home
I'm probably better off alone
People only care about the mundane
While confusio makes me scream
Yeah I'm talented in many ways
But this is the end of my days

I'm falling apart
I'm losing my mind
This is not
What I had in mind

Blind by the darkness that surrounds me
Wondering if this is a dream
Everything's wrong it seems
Sometimes it feels like I don't belong
Like for some reason I was built wrong
I don't understand anything
and I want to knw everything

I'm falling apart
I'm losing my mind
This is not
what I had in mind
I'm falling apart
I'm losing my mind
This is not
what I had in mind

3 Comments

Feb 2, 2008 05:34 PM by: animefreak95 chapter 1

=^0^=OMGZZZZZ!!!THTS MY LIFE TTLY!!!!!UVE CAPTURED MY VERY ESSENSE!!!FAVZZZ!=^0^=

Feb 2, 2008 05:25 PM by: Flyinmonkey1010 chapter 1

Dude.... That's awesome! Excellent work! U write poetry a lot better than I could!

Feb 2, 2008 04:46 PM by: Gothic_Bitch_From_Hell chapter 1

. . . . W O W that my friend was very deep and AWESOME!!!!
^_^ totally faving! that is how i like almost always feel!