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Poems by Gaara351
View as PDF, Submitted: 2008-02-16, Updated: 2008-05-10, Chapters: 6, Size: 1K, Words: 742, Comments: 58, Views: 542   
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these are my poems i will write more if you want
1 - Lonley
I’m a nice guy
Or so I’ve been told
So I must say my thoughts now
Before I grow old

From the day I met you
To the day I’ll move away
I like you forever
In every single way

You always have a boyfriend
I knew I didn’t have a chance
When for homecoming
I asked you to the dance

You are beautiful
In every single way
Only if when I move
You’d ask me to stay

I know you don’t like me
Don’t say that’s a lie
Because you never look
As you pass me by

I’m only your friend
Although you deserve better
The more you reject me
My arms (from crying) get wetter

As you read this
I am dying inside
And you don’t know
How many tears I’ve cried

Suicidal thoughts
Are what I get when you reject me
But what you know is I’m a caterpillar
Inside is a butterfly waiting to break free

All I need is an improvement
Only you can help me
Will you help me
Help me be free?
21 Comments (Most recent 10). Show All
sakura3001
Jul 26, 2008 04:37 PM by: sakura3001 chapter 1
AWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Graceful8Vampire8Godess8
Feb 24, 2008 09:05 PM by: Graceful8Vampire8Godess8 chapter 1
lovely :)
 
perservingthesexy
Feb 24, 2008 05:14 PM by: perservingthesexy chapter 1
again its amazing i love it...very touching
 
CrushCrush1234
Feb 21, 2008 07:46 PM by: CrushCrush1234 chapter 1
Poetry is your thing and it is very well written. I like this one :D
 
sexxygirl93
Feb 19, 2008 10:40 PM by: sexxygirl93 chapter 1
That is amazing
*xHUGGZx*
 
JohannManson
Feb 18, 2008 09:38 PM by: JohannManson chapter 1
Whoa...
Poetry is quite your thing, I'd say. Written well. I shall fave it.
 
XxAkinaxX
Feb 18, 2008 11:59 AM by: XxAkinaxX chapter 1
Very nice job.
I quiet like it.
Very deep.
 
YumeXItachi
Feb 18, 2008 08:06 AM by: YumeXItachi chapter 1
wow..seriously awesome dude =)
beautiful yet sad..i like it lol
 
Falconlobo
Feb 17, 2008 11:06 PM by: Falconlobo chapter 1
nice^^

no i have not read your poems yet cuse i did not know you had any^^
 
animehieikakashi
Feb 17, 2008 09:48 PM by: animehieikakashi chapter 1
nice
 
Tala777
Feb 17, 2008 09:35 PM by: Tala777 chapter 1
ooo nice^^ but this dosnt sound like a poem, it sounds more like a song^^
 
angelfox
Feb 17, 2008 09:33 PM by: angelfox chapter 1
that's awesome! ^_^ are you going to be a writer?
 
goth4ever
Feb 17, 2008 07:47 PM by: goth4ever chapter 1
Thats sooooooooooooo beautifull *sniffles*

Yet so sad!
 
piegurl
Feb 17, 2008 07:00 PM by: piegurl chapter 1
IM not really interested in poetry but this is amazing I could never do this its so beautifl!
 
vesblondie
Feb 17, 2008 06:49 PM by: vesblondie chapter 1
B-E-A-UTIFUL!
I can proudly say I really liked this and the way your style flowed in it. Very very nice! *thumbs up* :D
 
Gardian_of_the_shadow_relm
Feb 17, 2008 06:00 PM by: Gardian_of_the_shadow_relm chapter 1
It has a lot of emotion. It's beautiful and well written ^_^
Good job!
I can't write poetry..-_-'''
 
inoyamanakarox
Feb 17, 2008 03:35 PM by: inoyamanakarox chapter 1
beautiful a+ ^__^
 
arijo
Feb 17, 2008 03:28 PM by: arijo chapter 1
*sniff*beautiful..
 
mexmyselfxandxIZ
Feb 17, 2008 10:57 AM by: mexmyselfxandxIZ chapter 1
*sniff sniff* that's beutiful! it's great! ^w^
 
darkstar17
Feb 16, 2008 11:55 PM by: darkstar17 chapter 1
aww thats a beautiful peom

very well written
 
Axel4eva
Feb 16, 2008 11:37 PM by: Axel4eva chapter 1
awwwwww this a beautiful poem!!!^^

verrrrrry well written!!!

:3

*favs*
 

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