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Poems by Gaara351
View as PDF, Submitted: 2008-02-16, Updated: 2008-05-10, Chapters: 6, Size: 1K, Words: 742, Comments: 58, Views: 542   
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these are my poems i will write more if you want
4 - Pain
I feel pain
Every time you are around
This will always be the same
And will never change

I feel pain
That you can’t measure
Do you want me to be in pain?
Or do you want me to drown in rain

I feel pain
Don’t you understand?
I always feel pain
As I stand here in the rain

I feel pain
You have never experienced this pain
Pain has been with me and I am the same
And I don’t want to play this game

I feel pain
Don’t do this to me
I can’t take much more pain
Tell me now before I go insane
9 Comments
perservingthesexy
Feb 24, 2008 05:13 PM by: perservingthesexy chapter 4
your poetry is amazing...i love it
never stop
 
vesblondie
Feb 18, 2008 02:16 PM by: vesblondie chapter 4
awesome! Another gret one. Keeeeeeep it up! *hugs*
 
XxAkinaxX
Feb 18, 2008 12:04 PM by: XxAkinaxX chapter 4
Awesome.
Not much else I can say.
 
inoyamanakarox
Feb 18, 2008 08:43 AM by: inoyamanakarox chapter 4
OMG A+ AND GOOD JOB^__^
 
Tala777
Feb 18, 2008 08:01 AM by: Tala777 chapter 4
ur very talented! (prepare to become rich)

these show alot!!
KEEP IT UP!!
 
Axel4eva
Feb 18, 2008 12:25 AM by: Axel4eva chapter 4
ur verrrrrrry talented!!! :3

*favs*

again beautifully written
 
Falconlobo
Feb 17, 2008 11:10 PM by: Falconlobo chapter 4
very nice again you're good at these^^

i write fnafics alot and story descriptions for pics

i can tell you're good at writing^
 
punkiemonkie
Feb 17, 2008 09:53 PM by: punkiemonkie chapter 4
Holy crap you write fast! You have a real talent for writing poetry, keep it up! ^^
 
Gardian_of_the_shadow_relm
Feb 17, 2008 09:24 PM by: Gardian_of_the_shadow_relm chapter 4
It's emotional, flippin heck!
haha, Good job and YOU WRITE FAST!!
english was never my strong subject @_@
 

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