you are like the mortar between bricks...
you keep me from falling to pieces...
you are like the stars in the sky...
without you there is no light in my life...
you are like the fruit on a tree...
without you there is nothing fresh or new...
i need you...
please come back to me...
Very cute and emotional. ^^ I don't think you need the ellipsis (the "...") after every line in poetry, but heck, what do I know? ^__^ I like the analogies. Good job! ^^
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Submitted: 2008-03-06, Updated: 2008-03-06,
Chapters: 1, Size: 1K,
Words: 62, Comments: 7,
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