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Drunk Driving by moon_child2000
View as PDF, Submitted: 2004-06-01, Updated: 2004-06-01, Chapters: 1, Size: 1K, Words: 135, Comments: 8, Views: 91   
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A peom I wrote one night.it's kind of intense.
1 - Drunk Driving
So you had 2 or 3 drinks.
You didn't want to look like a wimp.
You took your car keys and started home.
CRASH!
BASH!
WHAM!
Sirens wailing all around you.
You look down to see what happened.
You see yourself, laying on the ground, covered by a sheet.
Your body is stiff, pale and cold to the touch.
Then your gaze shifts to the little boy, who's car you hit.
Going 85 down the wrong side of the road.
You hit his mom's car; she was only coming home from a late meeting with her kids.
The little 3 year old boy is dead.
His mom and 5 year old sister paralyzed for life.
You sink into the ground as you desend to where you belong.
All because of your pride.
8 Comments
moon_child2000
Aug 25, 2004 07:41 PM by: moon_child2000 chapter 1
You peoples are so freakin cool. I never thought it would get this many comments! I love you all!!
 
moon_child2000
Aug 21, 2004 07:22 AM by: moon_child2000 chapter 1
*glomps Colin* I love you Col. Thankies!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
anime_pimp1021
Aug 20, 2004 11:27 AM by: anime_pimp1021 chapter 1
*Sniffles* how sad it is a powerful poem.
 
moon_child2000
Jul 13, 2004 06:12 PM by: moon_child2000 chapter 1
I know. Thanies for the comment Keyblademastah.
 
Keyblademastah
Jul 12, 2004 08:01 AM by: Keyblademastah chapter 1
Aw... how sad....
 
moon_child2000
Jul 1, 2004 09:15 PM by: moon_child2000 chapter 1
Thankies MusicBitc. Just don't ask me were it came from. I have no idea at all.
 
MusicBitch
Jun 28, 2004 02:44 PM by: MusicBitch chapter 1
very strong poem i like it
 
moon_child2000
Jun 27, 2004 06:40 PM by: moon_child2000 chapter 1
Thankies for the comment suzafrodo. It makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside.
 

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