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Sonic World:Better Version by tayloralisa
View as PDF, Submitted: 2008-05-09, Updated: 2008-05-09, Chapters: 1, Size: 3K, Words: 596, Comments: 1, Views: 40   Violence: Mild Offensive Language: Mild
Games (158) > Sonic the Hedgehog series (6867) > Fan Characters (OC's) (12974)
I'm typing a better one. No random crap. For what it's worth, the Furry Sue Zoo rated me a 4/5. Which meant, it makes hardened criminals cry. That ticked me off. Now, I'm gonna give em somethin to laugh about. Laugh at my story....I tried atleast.
1 - Okay, Let's Go.
Not that I wouldn't want to go back into that cartoon fantasy, I had my reasons. My left is shot and I can't handle another episode of turmoil and fighting. I was living at home in Leavenworth, KS, going to middle school with an average rating in the letter scores, and duh, targeted as being an artist when I get older. Normal/Weird. Yep, that defines me perfectly. "Come on! Let's go already!"
"No."
"Knuckles is gonna be there....though."
Yeah sure. Knuckles happened to be a longtime friend now. Super. That old spark was getting to me. "But, Jess-"
"We're going. That's final."
She was pulling on my collar. "JESS!!!! NO FOR THE LOVE OF GOD!!!! I HAVE HOMEWORK!!!"
~Sonic World~
Dangit. I was pulled in once again by my deranged friend of 9 years going up, and sadly, I'm an Echidna again. Not only that, my appearance has changed, a little. The dredlocks from the original confrontation had bands on them and were pretty long. My right eye, the only one visible, were bright blue. The other had a wraps of bandages over it. I was wearing a shirt that said 'I'm Cooler Than Anybody Here', a shirt that I was wearing earlier, black capri-like pants, and the pink and purple gloves with spikes turned crimson. My shoes changed from pink, least favorite color and purple to red and black Converses. Jessica seemed original. She was still pink of course but, seemed to be fashioning a t-shirt saying 'My Immortal', title from an Evanesence song apparently, black K-Swiss's and camo pants. We looked like original goth-emo-punk hadcore chicks. Atleast Jessica did. I looked like an emo distraught coming out of those scary movies. Maybe the clothes have to fit the mood once you jump in. We were in the clearing that we were in last time we were here. The city hadn't changed one bit apparently.
"Hey, where's the others?"
"I don't know. Maybe on vacation?"
"NO! NO DONT SAY THAT!"
Inside joke. Everytime we say 'on vacation' about a specific character, they're either dead or missing. Example:Axel's not dead! He's on vacation! Quotation from Jessica, ladies and gentlemen. I didn't look around too much before deciding to head off to find the others.
~Here we are.~
"HELLO.....????" Why the freak did I yell? Lord knows what could be in here. I saw a blue flash for a minute. "Was that-"
"Yep."
"SONIC!!!"
Knuckles ran right past us and was running after him for who knows what. Tempermental and gullible ol' Knuckles. "Hey, Knux!"
He was still running after the goofy and freedom-loving hedgehog. Lovely. The two never really agreed sometimes and apparently, that had to be one of those times. "PEOPLES!!!!" I shouted finally. Knuckles stopped and turned around. "LaKeis?"
"Yep."
"LaKeis?!"
"YES!? IT'S ME FOR THE LOVE OF GOD!!!"
He was blushing with a an aggrivated face. He's rather shy around girls now that I think about it. He never showed that before. Eh. "What are you guys doing back?"
"She made me do it." I pointed at Jessica with an aggrivated face on. Jessica made a sweat drop. "Heh heh! I thought it'd be fun to see you guys. Heh heh...."
I made another face. "Er, anyway, I don't know why I jumped in here. There's nothin' really goin' on except ya'll to actin' crazy. AGAIN."
TO BE CONTINUED......
1 Comments
kyuubi64
May 9, 2008 05:01 PM by: kyuubi64 chapter 1
awesome.
 

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