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Please understand me, by Eggplant
View as PDF, Submitted: 2004-07-12, Updated: 2004-07-12, Chapters: 1, Size: 1K, Words: 225, Comments: 12, Views: 276   
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I made this one at 12-07-04 and uhm.. well it's a poem *cough cough*
1 - Please understand me,
I’m waiting anxiously
Till the moment you discover me
Please find out who I am
Please try your hardest to understand
Analyse the situation of this woman
Analyse what on earth is going on
In my head, it hurts so much
Painful memories, dark thoughts
I can’t see through them anymore
They’re blocking my emergencydoor
I’m trapped inside this burning body
Can you be the fireman who saves me
Be the guidestick for the one who can’t see
Be the protection preventing me from going insane
Could you be all that and still stay the same
Could you be all that and not be afraid of the pain?
If I seek protection under your wings
Won’t you fly away when tough times begin?
Give me certainty which I need the most
Assure me you won’t tell on as my secrets start to show
I trust you to not betray my state of mind
that even when you can’t handle it anymore you won’t leave me behind
I’m sorry if I drag you into this, I didn’t mean to
I’m sorry that I chain myself to you
But I can’t let you go, now that I felt your warmth
I can’t let you go, you gotta stay with me as you sworn
Please find out who I am,
Please try your hardest to be my friend.
12 Comments (Most recent 10). Show All
StephAlanPoe
Aug 2, 2006 09:46 AM by: StephAlanPoe chapter 1
eeeeeeeeee! i love this poem so much! Can I print it out and stick it on my wall of fame? It RULES...
 
StephAlanPoe
Jul 24, 2006 11:54 AM by: StephAlanPoe chapter 1
OMG! I must have read this, like, 20 times now....
And every time I read it, it just keeps getting better and better. Makes me cry every time too, but thats what I like about it. n.n
 
StephAlanPoe
Jun 26, 2006 10:18 AM by: StephAlanPoe chapter 1
*agrees with dj_gamer_girl*

cept this story is like me and mah imagianary friend. Joe.

*glomps Joe* I WUVVV YOUUUUU!

I love this poem. I shall make it my duty to pilgrimage to it whenever i feel lonesome.
 
Meg_Moo
Aug 18, 2005 09:33 PM by: Meg_Moo chapter 1
That is amazing!!!!
 
Freckled_Pancakes
Aug 9, 2005 03:07 PM by: Freckled_Pancakes chapter 1
*cries* that's so good! i loved it! keep up the good work.
 
bek-ee
Jun 24, 2005 10:38 PM by: bek-ee chapter 1
hey thats good, keep writing (and drawing) i'll be chearing for you. =3
 
dj_gamer_girl
May 22, 2005 04:50 AM by: dj_gamer_girl chapter 1
i...i...thats so...whaaaaaaaaaa!
i cry everynight.
coz i fell no one cares about me but my angel!!!
allen is the angel that helps me!! humans are breakin my heart
 
ShadowOfDarkness
Oct 2, 2004 09:13 AM by: ShadowOfDarkness chapter 1
*claps like a mentle-case* wooooooooo! go Eggplant!
... i dunno why but i cant help coming back every now and then to read this poem... its sooo good!
 
Eggplant
Sep 23, 2004 02:54 PM by: Eggplant chapter 1
thanks so much *blush*

*bow*
 
Anime-Chick
Sep 23, 2004 11:53 AM by: Anime-Chick chapter 1
If that's the case..i'll be your friend!!! you can't have enough friends right?? and i love it! i really really really reaaally do!! your my fav writer and this is my fav poem!
 
cptShort
Sep 6, 2004 11:35 PM by: cptShort chapter 1
I hope not..... That'd be really depressing. ,-_-,
 
ShadowOfDarkness
Sep 2, 2004 01:03 PM by: ShadowOfDarkness chapter 1
thats lovely. very mooving... is this how you feel yourself? just... desperate for a friend?
 

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