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Naruto's Dream: One Year of Training by rffraff05
View as PDF, Submitted: 2007-08-04, Updated: 2007-11-23, Chapters: 29, Size: 237K, Words: 47199, Comments: 436, Views: 3329   Violence: Mild
Anime/Manga (0) > Naruto series (2224)
my first story! this is Naruto OC wonderland, if you have an OC tell me!
0 - The Stranger
Note: I don’t own naruto, however I do pown occasionally.

The Stranger of Konoha
One night there were three people standing at the entrance to the Leaf village. Two were honest guards who were feeling very unlucky and with good reason. They had happened to be on guard when none other than the Hokage herself showed up. Both shocked by this visit they asked her why she had come.
She simply replied, “I might have a friend show up,” and left it at that. Now at first they were nervous because if they even made the slightest slip up well… everyone knows about Tsunade’s vicious temper. But not now. Now even though it was the middle of June an eerie cold had swept the village. Not only that but it was a moonless night. Now, neither of the guards were superstitious, but this was a darkness that you could feel.
Nothing happened for about an hour and just as the guards began to loosen up they saw a stranger in the far distance. They didn’t go to meet him but sat up straight as they waited for the man. When he was closer they noticed he seemed very nervous as if there were something around him that he wanted to get rid of. As he arrived at the gate he took a piece of paper out of his pocket, left it on the ground and turned around walking back the same way he came.
One of the guards stood up to stop the man from leaving, but he barely stood up when the man said, “It’s from him.”
The guard turned around about to start walking again stopped as if something blocked his path. He then said without turning around, “He says that your debt has been paid Tsunade.” Then he left without turning back.
Tsunade smiled then turned to the guards saying, “You two can take the night off, I’ll take the post for tonight.”
One guard was ungrateful and said, “If you were going to let us have the night off you could have let us go when you first got here.”
Tsunade’s smiled dropped, and said in a serious voice, “Count your blessings, at least he didn’t come in person.”
“Well I still think you could hav…,” he only got that far because a kunai had made sure he would never talk again. Tsunade and the other guard looked up in the direction the kunai came from. On top of the gate was a lone figure a ragged cape and scarf blowing in the wind. But what was truly amazing was that even with the moon gone his eyes glowed. They were a brilliant iceberg blue and shone as if they were two stars.
He turned around and said it so soft the guard thought it was the wind, “Ungrateful wretch.” He then blended into the darkness around him and disappeared.
The guard started to run after him but Tsunade stopped him. “That was him,” she said, then went back to the entrance. The guard was secretly glad she had stopped him. He hadn’t been thinking right. And he didn’t want to end up like the body on the street.


Hey please comment I would really enjoy it. There is a chance you can be in the story. Sorry guys its only for girls. I plan on hooking all the genin up but I need names. Like good Japanese names. Just leave a comment saying the Japanese name. I will post the list later on. And its first come first served. So girls who like gaara says so in the comment and the first one to do so will be with him!!!
205 Comments
Tifa777
Aug 10, 2008 12:06 PM by: Tifa777 chapter 0
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TTfan1
May 27, 2008 02:10 PM by: TTfan1 chapter 0
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHH!!!!

I'm interested now.
 
SquishyNinaChan
Dec 31, 2007 10:56 AM by: SquishyNinaChan chapter 0
OMG i finally remembered i have to read this....*forgot what FAC even was*
ummm well great story!......er...well, so far..........
 
Kohakucrazy
Dec 7, 2007 08:27 PM by: Kohakucrazy chapter 0
This is... ok...I guess.... I mean the stranger was kinda creepy... Who IS it?
 
rffraff05
Dec 8, 2007 03:03 PM by: rffraff05 chapter 0
you'll find out!
 
FluffysPrincess2968
Nov 28, 2007 06:06 PM by: FluffysPrincess2968 chapter 0
Just thought I would throw this out here....

HOLY CRAP!!!!! THIS STORY IS HIGHER RANKING THAN SUPER SONIC TRUTH OR DARE!!!! :O!!!!
THATS ONE OF THE MOST POPULAR STORIES ON FAC!!!! :O!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
rffraff05
Dec 4, 2007 04:27 AM by: rffraff05 chapter 0
fluffy? care to explain what that means to me? i have no idea about what you are talking about
 
FluffysPrincess2968
Dec 5, 2007 03:50 PM by: FluffysPrincess2968 chapter 0
uhhh... look at my favs stories list ON MY PROFILE. u kno how it says them to the side under ur featured art? it moved above SSTOD. :D
 
AnimeAngel87
Nov 25, 2007 12:09 PM by: AnimeAngel87 chapter 0
When be Akane comming in?
 
rffraff05
Dec 4, 2007 04:30 AM by: rffraff05 chapter 0
she'll be coming soon in the sequel
 
Kouni46892742
Nov 23, 2007 08:01 PM by: Kouni46892742 chapter 0
OMGOMGOMGOMG!!!

THESE WERE ALL AWESOME!!! YESS!!!!
 
rffraff05
Nov 23, 2007 08:09 PM by: rffraff05 chapter 0
thanks!!!!
 
Kouni46892742
Nov 23, 2007 08:17 PM by: Kouni46892742 chapter 0
Really! Now you need to submit again soon! I can't take the suspense! It's killing me!

*dies*
 
See what I mean?!
 
FluffysPrincess2968
Nov 23, 2007 08:34 PM by: FluffysPrincess2968 chapter 0
*pulls a Kool-aid* OH YEEEEEEAAAAAAAAHHH!!!! *dies*
 
rffraff05
Nov 23, 2007 08:23 PM by: rffraff05 chapter 0
yeah, i know what you mean
 
eelchic
Nov 18, 2007 01:57 PM by: eelchic chapter 0
OMG THOSE LAST 3 CHAPPS WERE AMZING I LUVED THEM EXPECIALLY WITH NEJI AND HINATA CANT WAIT 4 NEXT UPDATE!!!!!! ^-^ <3
 
AnimeAngel87
Oct 26, 2007 05:21 PM by: AnimeAngel87 chapter 0
Sorry 4 the late reviews i havent been on 4 a while
 
eelchic
Oct 20, 2007 07:38 AM by: eelchic chapter 0
INTERESTING WAT WILL SASUKE DO? WILL HE BETRAY DAN OR OROCHIMARU? WAT WILL NARUTO LEARN? JUST WAT IM WONDERING FANTASTICAL CHAPPY CANT WAIT 4 NEXT 1 CAKE 4 U ^-^!!!!
 
eelchic
Oct 18, 2007 12:53 PM by: eelchic chapter 0
xiting chap!!!! who will learn the flashes technique? this is wat im lookin forward 2 Yah
 
eelchic
Oct 4, 2007 12:49 PM by: eelchic chapter 0
awsome chap cant wait 4 next one!!!!!!
 
eelchic
Sep 28, 2007 01:39 PM by: eelchic chapter 0
awsomeness cant wait 4 next one!!!!! ^-^
 
SharinganKakashi
Sep 24, 2007 08:11 PM by: SharinganKakashi chapter 0
the preview for that chapter was great lol im still behinde 2 chapters il have to read it tomarrow later dude and that's very clever this will be very no extremly long not only that but itl be great mabey some day theyl make it into a chapter or movie in the REAL show i wouldnt put it past them in 18 chp youv had 1000 veiws
in my 3 chapters iv had 50 veiws -_-" oh well im not cut out for storey writeing.
 
SasukesGirl01
Sep 22, 2007 07:01 AM by: SasukesGirl01 chapter 0
hey! i loved it! do you.. think my oc could be in it!?
 
rffraff05
Sep 22, 2007 08:00 AM by: rffraff05 chapter 0
sure! i just need some information, but you might have to wait a while. everyone who reads my story has an oc in it
 
FluffysPrincess2968
Sep 21, 2007 06:53 PM by: FluffysPrincess2968 chapter 0
OMG!!! KICK-@$$!!!! WRITE MORE!!! and, again, WHEN WILL MY OTHER OC COME IN!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
 
rffraff05
Sep 21, 2007 07:58 PM by: rffraff05 chapter 0
i told you, just be patient and wait!!!
 
AnimeAngel87
Sep 21, 2007 06:34 PM by: AnimeAngel87 chapter 0
O.C?

D:
 
rffraff05
Sep 21, 2007 07:59 PM by: rffraff05 chapter 0
did you want your's in here?
 
AnimeAngel87
Sep 21, 2007 08:00 PM by: AnimeAngel87 chapter 0
Yes

:D
 
rffraff05
Sep 21, 2007 05:58 PM by: rffraff05 chapter 0
sweeet!! 200 comments! thank you all my readers, this means a lot to me!
 
rffraff05
Sep 21, 2007 04:07 PM by: rffraff05 chapter 0
yes!! 1000 views! thank you everyone!
 
NAERA
Sep 20, 2007 08:33 AM by: NAERA chapter 0
WOOOOOOOOW I THINK AM GOING TO GET HOOKED!
 
Ulrich101692
Sep 19, 2007 06:27 PM by: Ulrich101692 chapter 0
dude,...it's awesome!!
I will read the rest tomorrow  because,I have to go
 
rffraff05
Sep 19, 2007 06:34 PM by: rffraff05 chapter 0
thanks!! hope you enjoy the rest!
 
ninjaofthewaterlily
Sep 19, 2007 06:02 PM by: ninjaofthewaterlily chapter 0
wow!!!! this is so cool!!!
i likes it!
 
ninjaofthewaterlily
Sep 19, 2007 06:09 PM by: ninjaofthewaterlily chapter 0
i plan on reading the next couple of chapters in a little while!!!
 
rffraff05
Sep 19, 2007 06:20 PM by: rffraff05 chapter 0
sweet!
 
vesblondie
Sep 19, 2007 05:31 PM by: vesblondie chapter 0
Wow. Amazing writing style :] It's really really good!
I love this already. I'M HOOKED NOW. >X3 *faves*
 
rffraff05
Sep 19, 2007 06:23 PM by: rffraff05 chapter 0
yay i love faving!
 
Kouni46892742
Sep 16, 2007 05:32 PM by: Kouni46892742 chapter 0
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! THE SUSPENCE IS KILLING ME!!!
 
eelchic
Sep 15, 2007 05:31 PM by: eelchic chapter 0
VERY GOOD BUT WHAT WAZ KIBA GUNNA THREATEN NARUTO FOR BUT THAT WAZ VERY NARUTASTIC WITH LOTS OF AWSOMENESS!!!!!!! ^-^
 
Kouni46892742
Sep 12, 2007 04:54 PM by: Kouni46892742 chapter 0
Please tell me I'll be more in the next chappie....
 
eelchic
Sep 6, 2007 01:11 PM by: eelchic chapter 0
OMG I TOTALLY LOVE ANIMAL I HAVE BECOME ITS ON MY PROFILE AND LUVED 9TAILS FIGHT TOTALLY AMAZING IT BUT WHO WON AND WHO GETS 2 FIGHT DAN? IT WAZ AWSOME!!!!!!!! SO STRAWBERRIES 4 U! ^-^
 
onepiecenut
Sep 4, 2007 06:12 PM by: onepiecenut chapter 0
Rather intresting...I'm gonna go read the rest.
 
rffraff05
Sep 4, 2007 06:14 PM by: rffraff05 chapter 0
thank you!
 
eelchic
Sep 3, 2007 05:19 PM by: eelchic chapter 0
OMG IT WAZ A SET UP!!! AND WAT WAZ IN NARUTO'S BOOK AND WAT WAZ NARUTO'S BOOK GREAT CHAP AMAZING CANT WAIT 4 NEXT ONE !!!! >_< *SQEAL*
 
TheMasterOfPuppets
Sep 3, 2007 10:00 AM by: TheMasterOfPuppets chapter 0
Interesting.........
 
eelchic
Sep 1, 2007 08:08 PM by: eelchic chapter 0
TISK TISK TISK SHINO, HINATA KICKED SOME A** U GO GIRL!!!! GO GO GO SHIKAMARU YAH!!! GREAT CHAP CANT WAIT 4 NEXT ONE HAVE A GOOD LABOR DAY!!!
 
nextguardian
Sep 1, 2007 06:48 PM by: nextguardian chapter 0
Great start!
 
rffraff05
Sep 1, 2007 06:53 PM by: rffraff05 chapter 0
thanks
 
Kouni46892742
Sep 1, 2007 04:06 PM by: Kouni46892742 chapter 0
O_O...No! Bad Shino! Don't let Neji-nii die!
 
eelchic
Sep 1, 2007 11:19 AM by: eelchic chapter 0
best chapter so far cant wait 4 next 1 strawberries 4 u !!!!!!!!! ^-^
 
FluffysPrincess2968
Aug 31, 2007 09:01 PM by: FluffysPrincess2968 chapter 0
*cries* WAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! POOR DAN-SAN!!!!! WAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!
 
FluffysPrincess2968
Aug 31, 2007 08:16 PM by: FluffysPrincess2968 chapter 0
OMG!! FREE MALL!!!! VIDEO GAMES AHOY!!!! (and yes, I AM A GIRL!)
 
Nekogal411
Aug 31, 2007 06:29 PM by: Nekogal411 chapter 0
^____^ Awesome! Well written! i was wondering if my charater could be in it? or something
 
eelchic
Aug 29, 2007 08:33 PM by: eelchic chapter 0
AWSOME BY THE AWSOMENESS RELLY FUNNY 2 CANT WAIT 4 NEXT CHAP!!! STRAWBERRIES!!
 
Symphoniaprincess101
Aug 28, 2007 09:14 AM by: Symphoniaprincess101 chapter 0
awsome ^^
 
eelchic
Aug 27, 2007 02:57 PM by: eelchic chapter 0
OMG THE CHAP 9 WAZ AMAZING AND CHAPTER 10 WAZ SO SWEET!!!!! I TOTALLY LOVED BOTH
 
Nekogal411
Aug 26, 2007 01:23 PM by: Nekogal411 chapter 0
Cool! ^^
 
rffraff05
Nov 25, 2007 06:35 AM by: rffraff05 chapter 0
thank you!!
 
Symphoniaprincess101
Aug 25, 2007 07:34 PM by: Symphoniaprincess101 chapter 0
might have to read it when i get home on monday.
 
rffraff05
Nov 25, 2007 06:34 AM by: rffraff05 chapter 0
awww! we'll see you then!
 
117masterchief
Aug 25, 2007 07:17 PM by: 117masterchief chapter 0
cool
 
rffraff05
Aug 25, 2007 07:37 PM by: rffraff05 chapter 0
Thanks and tell your friends!
 
Chamilionshin
Aug 25, 2007 01:48 PM by: Chamilionshin chapter 0
yer strorey is awesome
 
rffraff05
Nov 25, 2007 06:33 AM by: rffraff05 chapter 0
thanks!!
 
eelchic
Aug 25, 2007 10:27 AM by: eelchic chapter 0
SOOOOOOO GOOD LIKE AMAZINGLY GOOD!!!!!!!!!! I DEFF CANT WAIT 4 NEXT CHAPPY!!! STRAWBERRIES ROCK LOLZ!!!
 
rffraff05
Nov 25, 2007 06:32 AM by: rffraff05 chapter 0
STRAWBERRIES ROCK!!!
 
angelfox
Aug 24, 2007 06:03 PM by: angelfox chapter 0
Very cool!^^
 
rffraff05
Nov 25, 2007 06:29 AM by: rffraff05 chapter 0
thank you!!
 
eelchic
Aug 20, 2007 09:44 PM by: eelchic chapter 0
AWSOMELY AWSOME RELLY GOOD!!!!!!!
 
rffraff05
Nov 25, 2007 06:26 AM by: rffraff05 chapter 0
YAY!!! Thanks!
 
SharinganKakashi
Aug 16, 2007 08:54 AM by: SharinganKakashi chapter 0
i must say ur a very good storey writer ul have 2 tell me when u update ^^
 
rffraff05
Aug 16, 2007 11:19 AM by: rffraff05 chapter 0
thanks a lot might have chapter 6 up today but i have orientation in like 3 hours it might be late tonight
 
sasukeXsakuraforever
Aug 14, 2007 04:49 PM by: sasukeXsakuraforever chapter 0
ZOMG I like it so far! Very nice description and personalities! If I'm allowd to be in the story, my name could be Celine. Its not very Japanese, but it's definatly not a common name like Brittany or Jessica. So Celine is my name, and if you don't like that or you want it japanese, I'll think of something! GOOD STORY THOUGH! Keep it up! ^_~
 
rffraff05
Aug 14, 2007 04:51 PM by: rffraff05 chapter 0
hey thanks bunches i might squeeze in # 4 today if not today tommorow
 
sasukeXsakuraforever
Aug 14, 2007 04:55 PM by: sasukeXsakuraforever chapter 0
No problem! ^_^ So it's ok if I use Celine as my name? Because I can change it if you would like?
 
rffraff05
Aug 14, 2007 05:00 PM by: rffraff05 chapter 0
no no Celine is great its awesome
 
sasukeXsakuraforever
Aug 14, 2007 05:02 PM by: sasukeXsakuraforever chapter 0
Ok then! Thank you so much!^^
 
winxgirl21
Aug 6, 2007 03:02 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
This story is really awesome so far! Can I make a suggestion? Maybe put a little bit more spacing in it. Other than that, I can't wait for the next chapter!
 
rffraff05
Nov 25, 2007 06:20 AM by: rffraff05 chapter 0
point taken!
 

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