Comments for picture #694597urn:uuid:ebc09a48-11f9-59cb-f0e3-5c22c716513aComment by Gehe2008-06-28T03:02:51-07:00
Ink lines is ok. but you shuld be more carefull with the coloring. and try practicing "smooth coloring" meanig that you follow the shape of the object so it gets more #D feeling. You did it on someparts mainly on the shadows.