Comments for Story #10812urn:uuid:4c20cc0b-90c8-eaf6-55a0-9c394e8caf13Comment by SoraYamato2006-10-07T03:04:50-07:00
Cavendish has great public speaking skills. Any debating team would want him for his ability to create a good argument regardless which side of the argument they must take. Your use of imagery creates a chilling picture painted in greys and military strictness that sends a shiver up the spine and makes one dread the inevitable battle that will surely endanger our heroes.
Very interesting plot development.
Keep up the good work]]>Comment by ShadowDragon22006-08-25T21:48:07-07:00Comment by Cara2005-01-26T12:14:03-08:00Comment by MaZz-Da-mAsTeR2005-01-24T11:36:54-08:00
P.S: i got more pics submitted and i would appreciate comments on it thanx,see ya!
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