Comments for Story #52837urn:uuid:a74ecce1-7a0a-bb00-01b2-d54c5a559283Comment by darkwolf3332008-11-26T13:35:52-08:00Comment by darkwolf3332008-11-21T23:26:45-08:00Comment by wagz202008-10-22T11:35:58-07:00
ooo Blaze and admirer >_O. i do like romance, weather the story is all romance or just has a love story within it makes it more interesting. and of course, typical, the guy doesn't get it, lol. but Blaze is a good guy though and likeable :)
great work, really liked this chapter! good ending, makes me want to read more.]]>Comment by darkwolf3332008-10-21T18:13:55-07:00Comment by wagz202008-10-20T14:29:15-07:00
you may want to look over this again, real little stuff, just some names not capitalized in the begining.
great forshadowing at the end, that preminition was ominous, it was those dogs/wolves in the first chapter right? yeah, really want to read on when i get the chance, great work]]>Comment by wagz202008-10-20T14:20:47-07:00
i guess it's just a pretty calm start, it's just introducing some characters and their personalties such as Blaze and his family (his dad sounds cool)as well as the setting. that little Rusty is a trip! ^_^ i like what ya did with her speech.
So very good intro, hope more happens next chapter, but the important thing is they caught da huge fishy! XD]]>Comment by darkwolf3332008-10-17T00:49:44-07:00Comment by darkwolf3332008-10-11T16:24:56-07:00Comment by darkwolf3332008-10-09T18:25:50-07:00Comment by darkwolf3332008-10-09T18:20:55-07:00