Comments for Story #53433urn:uuid:1bda9480-401e-936f-51a1-4f824d0edb3dComment by mangacheese18182008-12-10T14:44:05-08:00
Though some of the words sound like you're using a thesaurus; they don't fit very well.]]>Comment by kath2008-10-18T13:16:07-07:00Comment by nextguardian2008-10-12T22:59:54-07:00Comment by nextguardian2008-10-12T22:56:05-07:00Comment by nextguardian2008-10-12T22:55:20-07:00Comment by darkwolf3332008-10-05T11:52:32-07:00Comment by darkwolf3332008-10-05T11:39:54-07:00Comment by kath2008-10-03T16:52:04-07:00Comment by Falconlobo2008-10-01T16:05:17-07:00
but might want to change her mother died to her grandmother died
and maybe check for any other typos^^]]>Comment by darkwolf3332008-09-19T17:56:37-07:00