this part made me cry!!!!
but still, i love your pic.
its very detailed, and even though shes so sad, shes still very beautiful.
please, keep drawing great artwork!^^

This part of the manga made me very buggy-eyed. All the stuff involving Miori left me quite shocked. It was the real turning point, I think.

I think you did well. And it's probably not you pencils that make it blurry, it's your scanner. Certain computer programs have features that correct the stuff that scanners mess up. Either that, or just outline everything very darkly.

that was such a sad part in the series.... but i think it's even worse when she gets pregnant, then finds out toya got killed.... i started cying so much... TOOOOOYAAAAA!!!!!

Oooh! This is good! I like it a lot!

I'm working on it....The whole pic is really big and dark..it was just the way i drew it i guess..

Maannnn-It's a bit blurry ((I'm guessing you used st00pid clicky pencils? They're pretty beasty.)) But good still. =3 When I first look at it, I don't think of Aya-I think of this one other chick from some Anime that I don't really know. X_x Then it hits me that it's Aya. lol I'm dumb-niiiiiiice job! =D You need to put your other stuff up!!