The arms and hands look great. But I think that a) The sword looks bland. It wouldn't hurt to add a line down it to show where the sharp part begins. b) If you weren't going to color her whole body, you shouldn't have colored the jacket and pants. It just doesn't stand out like I'm assuming was your goal. Maybe just coloring in the blood would be nice. :) c) How does the blood from her nose run a straight line over her lips? Also, I think her eyes are too small and her lips too low.