Tirmun-The first page to my Manga...what do you guys think? If you can't read something let me know.And also as a special feature-<br />
Raistlin- THIS is what you've been hiding from me?!!? It shows me in my underwear in the FIRST page!!! And my brother in a skirt?!? *tries to incinerate page*<br />
Tirmun- ...It's fire proof! You should really let me finish talking before you go casting spells Raist.
Oh...BTW Raist is supposed to have an annoyed tone in this comic...or at least in this page...kind of snide and supiorior too, as if talking with an inferior.
^_^ anywho, i like it so far, but it's kinda hard to see where the panels are/aren't...