A) Al has very few curves in his figuring
B)You have his shoulders sloping when they are balky and right by his face. In fact, he looks like he's wearing a high-collared cape
C) The wierd horse-tail thing in his helmet is too short, even for a headshot
D) It looks like some snobby noble it wearing a too-small helmet and his chin is jutting out prominantly and the back of the helmet is painted like an Easter Egg.

the head is too skinny

cool! great job on al! hope to see more pics up! ^___^