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| Rating | No objectionable content | Media | Ink / Markers |
| Category | Comics (588) > - Internet comics (183) | Time Taken | |
| November 16, 2005 | Reference | ||
| Keywords | cys, katie Laurie, ship, blue |
Tags | cys, blue, kati, ship, lauri, |
| License | Berne Convention - Default automatic international copyright. |
-Color scheme. I like how you used different shades of blue
-faces: anatomy, position, mouthes
-pose
-shadows. most people forget them
Bad:
-anatomy of the body is a little off. The wrists shouldn't curve so much. and there is a slight bump on the right side of her jaw
-white lines are visible from coloring
Overall: Great concept. You have somethings you still need to work on, but who doesn't?
If you want to see what I mean by some of the things, I can 'redraw' the pic and explain the errors and how to fix them. Reply in my profile or e-mail me. Thanks! I am just here to help.