Shaman King doujinshi, page one. by yamiskoi

Shaman King doujinshi, page one. by yamiskoi

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	yamiskoi
	A comic that will be based around the pairing Yoh x Amidamaru. Will have many pages, but only if I get reviews. :P Please let me know what you people think: I want to improve for the better.

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Category	Anime/Manga (1) > Shaman King (955)	Time Taken
Date Submitted	March 5, 2006	Reference
Keywords	Shaman King, Amidoh, AmixYoh, Yoh Asakura, Amidama	Tags	yoh, king, amidoh, shaman, amidama, amixyoh, asakura,
License	Berne Convention - Default automatic international copyright.

1 Comments

by: sis on Mar 6, 2006 05:52 AM

I think you need to outline it.It would make it look better,and try useing more than the face shot,face shots can it very boring.Allso try puting there faces at deffent veiws,like the side so it looks a little lease 2d.A manga is a lot better when it looks more real than just paper.Your lines look pretty good.And maybe a little bit more of a background would make this pop out too.I hope this helped.X_x
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