Great work! You're doing much better then I was at your age. I was still putting too many fingers on people at 8. :D

In any case, you're off to a great start! Keep it up!! ^_^

Very nice, just keep working on it and you will get better. But wonderfull start.

The eyes look really good here, and the outfit design on the back one is pretty cool too. If I were to give some advice here, here are some small issues to help you out: I see some variations in your hand drawing. The fist in your other pic, and the hand gripping the sword on the back character are really good, but the others are not of the quality you can produce. The swords look okay, but to get them straighter, you should use a ruler or something (there are also strokes you can use to make them appear straight without a straightedge.) You seem to have decent costume design. The only other tweak I would do is melding the hair into the forhead (I know it is bad wording, but you know what I mean.) You could first look at already created anime characters and see how thier hair looks. Other than that, this is a really good pic. and I really see some improvement. You just gotta keep at it!