By far the best that I've seen on your gallery. The colours are nice and are especially so at the body. However, his face needs more expression. The lines are there, but in art, lines do vary in all shapes and sizes. So do what's necessary and it will definitely shine.
oh, he is so CUTE!!! i luv ur art! *huggles Shippo* i tried to draw Shippo once, but he somehow ended up lookin' like a toad. anywayz, really good pic.