What a shame of the eye, away from that this pic is absolutly beautiful!
Keep up with the good stuff :)

The eye.. well, that's too bad.. but we all learn, ne~?
Anyways, the rest looks nice, and i truly like the hair ajnd the tear.. for some reason. XD.. i've lost ym drawing'talents' (i don't know what else to call it) for a while.. nothing normal will come out.. :is sad: anyway, i'm planning to draw ym characters in a band.. myup myup..

awww
 
i lub it!!!
 
I think its brilliant!!
 
THe eye messup doesnt affect the pix.
 
I think its good
 
Just think of it as shading!!!!

Aww, no worries. It just kinda looks like the has different coloured eyes, but that's cool! This is some nice lineart, and it looks amazingly similar to the Furuba style, so nice work!

Aw, this is cute.

yes, that's too bad... But it really is a beatiful picture! I need to upload something too!