Pretty snazzy. Once again, definitely type your words, especially with this much text. If your manga looks neater, more people will read it. I'm quite serious. Other than that, you could really stand to loose the extreme swearing, it really isn't necessary, but if you are going to use it, you should mark it in the warning section.

YAYYYYYYYYYYYY TEAMING UP! YAY bonus points for all the banadanas~!!! X3 Awesomeness~!
Fhame is teh ultimate coolie. :o Can I buy one?? :D

Keep it up~!! YAY Fhame~