For number twelve I decided to do it in color just to see how it turned out. I'm not sure if I like it or not, the black and white has its own charm to me.
Ok, since my last comment was kind of inane (I was pressed for time), I'm re-commenting :P
I'd like to start off by saying that this comic is utterly amazing.
First of all, your drawing style is fantastic! The mix of curly and straight lines, along with the thick black outlines, is very distinctive and striking.
You did a great job with the character designs; even the "extras" look planned out. I have to say that Eric's cloak-thingie is just flat-out COOL, and I like the detail of the little crosses on Travis's clothes; they're a nice touch.
Your panel set-up is very well thought-out too. The way you keep switching up the perspective and lighting and angle, it all flows so well and is never dull. Nice job on this bit 'o exposition on this page; it could have been a boring series of talking heads instead in the hands of someone with less skill.
Overall, this comic looks very professional (especially the last three panels of this page). I salute your comic-drawing prowess! *salutes*