Awww I loved this pic in the manga. You did a good job.

Awww, cute!

I really love the art it's really good.I hope I get to see more of your  art.

wow, very cuute :) *favs*

It is common for people to copy drawings from the mangas/animes, but I find that you should try to find your own style of drawing in difforent poses that you yourself has thought up. There should be more shading in the left shoulder, it seems to be just white, and Kyo seems to be more floating than being held onto, along with his neck it much too thin. My question, Why does Kyo have the bigger head?
I am not trying to make you feel bad, I am trying to improve you.
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Awwwww!!!! He looks soooooo cute!!! Awsome job!!! ^^