some helpful critisism- you should try drawinf ur lines a little neater, just to make the picture seem presentable (nothing mean) and don't ever ever ever use crayons while colouring in a pictures. It just messes it up, Roseart colouring pencils are very, very good. To fill in colours perfectly, use the perverted techinque. The technique goes like this... You stroke up and down with ur pencil and push in hard... XD...but seriously it works...

this is colored in colered pencil

oh, sorry,lol, i thoght it was crayons...

oh yea i also have it coloured just to show you what i mean...

Cool!

wow
not bad
not bad at all
and i can't believe this only took 25mins

very nice rikku's my fave out of yrp and yes kt she is in kh2

Well good!! Lol!
Is she in KOH 2????