some helpful critisism- you should try drawinf ur lines a little neater, just to make the picture seem presentable (nothing mean) and don't ever ever ever use crayons while colouring in a pictures. It just messes it up, Roseart colouring pencils are very, very good. To fill in colours perfectly, use the perverted techinque. The technique goes like this... You stroke up and down with ur pencil and push in hard... XD...but seriously it works...