ok, the colored version of the characters requested by _icypanther_ on the forums, ^_^, i hope i get the colors right and don't forget, leave a comment~
Aight. There are a lot of the things I could critique, btu I picked two for this case.
1. Male's shoulders, huge. His whole body is disproportioned to the girl's.
2. Belly button. I could stick my hand in it. 'Nuff said
i did wanted to make Conner(the man in the picture) bigger than her, to accentuate the difference between them, i did failed in giving it perspective, because i wanted him to be bended over her(agg, it's so hard to explain... *sigh*).
about the belly button, it's the result of lazyness, i should have erased the lineart there and replaced it with painting, but again i was lazi, so i just painted over it.
this is really really beautiful!
I envy you. Your a better artist then me. ^_^
*favs.*